Looks like you accidentally posted this a few times. I'll respond to the first essay.

Glad you found the feedback helpful. No worries about the time: if you wrote this in 25 minutes, you should be able to complete a fully essay within the limit. I don't mind if you use First, Second, Third, etc when you are writing. My problem was with the sentence fragments that each of these words ...

Hello vp101, I'm glad to see that you've started your AWA prep. Congrats on the good practice score, and I hope your scores on other sections continue to improve as you prepare for the exam. Writing: There are a few typos/missing words that I noticed, but nothing major. As long as you save a few min...

Thanks for clearing up the last sentence. Good luck on the next response!

Hello piyush.shah901, I hope that these comments help you prepare for the exam. Writing: Be careful with "it's" and "its" in your writing. You should only use "it's" as a short version of it is or it has, but you say "to enhance it's [the company's] perception.&quo...

Hello savannah.hooper, After your last response, I recommended saving a few minutes for proofreading and making sure that your intro clearly and succinctly summarizes the author's argument. Writing: I didn't catch any major writing errors in this response. I'm guessing that you had time to fix minor...

Hello rohanr, I hope that these comments help you as you prep for the GMAT. Writing: There are a few careless errors that you should be able to catch if you save a few minutes to review your work before submitting it. I recommend using more transition words as you start new paragraphs because it was...

Hello rohanr, I hope that these comments help you as you prep for the GMAT. Writing: There are a few careless errors that you should be able to catch if you save a few minutes to review your work before submitting it. I recommend using more transition words as you start new paragraphs because it was...