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severence package

by FINALCOUNTDOWN » Thu Feb 12, 2009 10:29 am
Unlike most severance packages, which require workers to stay until the last day scheduled to collect, workers at the automobile company are eligible for its severance package even if they find a new job before they are terminated.
A) the last day scheduled to collect, workers at the automobile company are eligible for its severance package
B) the last day they are scheduled to collect, workers are eligible for it at the automobile company’s severance package
C) their last scheduled day to collect, the automobile company offers its severance package to workers.
D) their last scheduled day in order to collect, the automobile company’s severance package is available to workers.
E) the last day that they are scheduled to collect, the automobile company’s severance package is available to workers
E
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Re: severence package

by x2suresh » Thu Feb 12, 2009 11:08 am
FINALCOUNTDOWN wrote:Unlike most severance packages, which require workers to stay until the last day scheduled to collect, workers at the automobile company are eligible for its severance package even if they find a new job before they are terminated.
A) the last day scheduled to collect, workers at the automobile company are eligible for its severance package
B) the last day they are scheduled to collect, workers are eligible for it at the automobile company’s severance package
C) their last scheduled day to collect, the automobile company offers its severance package to workers.
D) their last scheduled day in order to collect, the automobile company’s severance package is available to workers.
E) the last day that they are scheduled to collect, the automobile company’s severance package is available to workers
E
between D and E.. for comparing "severence packages" with "SPs"

D looks best.

E --"the last day that they are scheduled to collect" awkward.. means.. they are collecting days..


I don't agree with OA.

What is the source? and OE?

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Re: severence package

by FINALCOUNTDOWN » Sun Feb 15, 2009 8:28 am
i agree with you.
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But the OA is E???
x2suresh wrote:
FINALCOUNTDOWN wrote:Unlike most severance packages, which require workers to stay until the last day scheduled to collect, workers at the automobile company are eligible for its severance package even if they find a new job before they are terminated.
A) the last day scheduled to collect, workers at the automobile company are eligible for its severance package
B) the last day they are scheduled to collect, workers are eligible for it at the automobile company’s severance package
C) their last scheduled day to collect, the automobile company offers its severance package to workers.
D) their last scheduled day in order to collect, the automobile company’s severance package is available to workers.
E) the last day that they are scheduled to collect, the automobile company’s severance package is available to workers
E
between D and E.. for comparing "severence packages" with "SPs"

D looks best.

E --"the last day that they are scheduled to collect" awkward.. means.. they are collecting days..


I don't agree with OA.

What is the source? and OE?

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by ebehboud » Sun Apr 12, 2009 7:14 pm
The source is GmatPrep Test 2.

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Re: severence package

by rahulg83 » Sun Apr 12, 2009 7:29 pm
FINALCOUNTDOWN wrote:Unlike most severance packages, which require workers to stay until the last day scheduled to collect, workers at the automobile company are eligible for its severance package even if they find a new job before they are terminated.
A) the last day scheduled to collect, workers at the automobile company are eligible for its severance package
B) the last day they are scheduled to collect, workers are eligible for it at the automobile company’s severance package
C) their last scheduled day to collect, the automobile company offers its severance package to workers.
D) their last scheduled day in order to collect, the automobile company’s severance package is available to workers.
E) the last day that they are scheduled to collect, the automobile company’s severance package is available to workers
E
D looks best to me, here their unambiguosly refers back to workers while in E, what does they refer back to?? Is it workers or severance packages?
Should be D

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by gmat740 » Sun Apr 12, 2009 9:33 pm
can you please underline the text, it will give a better understanding

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by yeloaw » Mon Apr 13, 2009 1:23 pm
I think D is wrong because "their last scheduled day in order to collect" changes the meaning.

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by lilu » Tue Apr 21, 2009 10:24 am
Just took GMATPrep and had this question. The OA is D, not E
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