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Thanks for the explanation dude. Awesome job! I just wanted to know what your opinion is on this question. So D huh ? Perfect!rahulakacyrus wrote:IMO D...
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Just wanted to check weather my answer is correct or not...
For the explaination:
Were it not for X and Y,
instead is wrong..changes the meaning of sentence A and B eliminated
would have been collapsing...present continous...C elim
In E, its is used wrongly...E elim
IMO: D
For the explaination:
Were it not for X and Y,
instead is wrong..changes the meaning of sentence A and B eliminated
would have been collapsing...present continous...C elim
In E, its is used wrongly...E elim
IMO: D
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Only C and D are in contention for being answers for the simple fact that the modifier needs to be close to the noun it is modifying, which clearly is "a star"
C can be disregarded for the fact that it unnecessarily uses the progressive tense and also is wordy
So Choice D best fits
C can be disregarded for the fact that it unnecessarily uses the progressive tense and also is wordy
So Choice D best fits

















