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I am planning on applying for my MBA this fall and have already started my applications. Please evaluate my candidacy for the following schools, and provide feedback as to which schools I should focus on.

I graduated from a top 30 undergrad business program with a degree in finance. My cumulative GPA is a 3.0 even. After school, I worked at a big bank in it's consumer lending office for 6 months, then transitioned to consulting at a top worldwide consulting firm. I was promoted a year early, and am on pace to get promoted again in the next 6 months. During my time in consulting, I have worked on various engagements, specializing in financial analysis and modeling, price analysis and modeling, audit readiness, budget formulation, and strategic planning. Cost models and pricing models that I developed have contributed to winning contract awards for 2 separate projects of +$600K each. I have worked in consulting for 3 years now, and my cumulative professional experience is just under 4 years (will be 4+ at matriculation, almost 5 when I include internships).

I recently re-took the GMAT and scored a 700 (Q48, V38). This is about my average (practice tests between 680-720), and given that I just got this score this week, I feel it's best to move forward with the applications and not re-take for a higher score.

Community involvement: Lead sub-tasks for a park resotration and clean up effort at local park this year - 2 years ago, I was a participant and did not lead. These efforts account for about 30 hours. Also - 6 years ago I was a HS Girls Basketball varsity assistant coach, accounting for hundreds of hours (all volunteer work, no pay). Is this too dated to mention/count, or is 6 years ago perfectly acceptable to include?

My story: I realize my GPA is low and will need to be addressed. When I was in college, my parents moved away from my hometown and I decided to continue living in my hometown. In addition to paying for college, I now also had to pay for living expenses during the summer. I held 3 jobs over the summers and steadily held jobs while on campus at college. Not that this should be read as a pity story (because its not), but I feel it contributed to my lower than expected GPA (25+ hours per week at work). There were times when my GPA dipped below 3.0, and I worked to make Dean's list to improve my GPA. Basically, I want to tell the story that I have proven the ability to suceed in the classroom, but balanced other factors, and demonstrated the ability to succeed in the classroom when necessary (any help on this specific subject is greatly appreciated).

Now, here are my target schools (in order of application due date):

UNC Kenan Flagler (12/2)
Kellogg (12/14)
Duke - Fuqua (1/4)
Chicago - Booth (1/4)
Penn - Wharton (1/4)
UVA - Darden (1/14)

Given that my post-MBA aspirations are to get into investment banking (the short answer to my goals/why mba essay), please evaluate my list of schools and let me know how I can best position myself for acceptance.

Note: I recently added Wharton (always knew it was the best finance school, but now that I achieved a 700, think it may be at least somewhat realistic). As the R2 deadline is the same as Duke, I am condsidering removing Fuqua from my list of schools. Please advise this decision, and my overall candidacy for all target schools. I would greatly appreciate any additional insight into how I can best frame my background and story to best succeed in the application process.

Thank you so so so much in advance for your advice - I look forward to your feedback!
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by CW2424 » Wed Nov 30, 2011 7:54 am
Good morning. I just want to follow up with my previous post. Is there something I should do to garner a response from an expert? Thank you very much for any assistance!

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by Jon@Admissionado » Fri Dec 02, 2011 5:37 am
Your school list a good one, and your GMAT is excellent. You have a very good story as for your GPA, which you are gonna write somewhere in your application. Tell them about living alone, about working three jobs, etc. It's a good thing you got that 700 too, cause it sort of makes up for the lower GPA.

As far as Duke vs. Wharton, I would say apply to the one you are more excited about going to (or both if you can squeeze them out).

At this point I think the most important thing though is to GET MOVING on that essay writing! Time is short.

As for how to frame your story, well you pretty much have it there outlined for you in what you wrote. It's about how you worked harder, moved up faster, got more responsibilities. Basically we want to see this upward yearning of your career towards reaching your goals.
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by CW2424 » Sun Dec 04, 2011 8:03 pm
Thank you so much for the feedback. I think I have done a decent job writing to my low GPA up to this point, so hopefully the ADCOMs can look past it and continue evaluating me on the rest of my profile.

I do appreciate your enthusiasm for my chances at my target schools. If possible, could you maybe provide a little more specific insight into my chance of admission at each school? As I make my decision to apply to Penn/Duke, I want to make sure that I have a good mix of competitive and reach schools. Others have given their feedback, and of course I can always look at school websites, but it would be helpful to hear from you, the expert, on my chances at each school. Of course it's a holistic evaluation process at each school, but based on the information I provided (work experience, GMAT, and GPA), what do you expect my admissions chances are at each school?

Again, I really appreciate your feedback and look forward to your continued advice.

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by Jon@Admissionado » Mon Dec 05, 2011 8:04 am
Well it's a pretty rough evaluation, but let's say that at UVA and UNC your chances are good. At Kellogg and Duke you are pretty competitive, and at Wharton and Chicago you'd be up for a challenge, but one with chances of you getting in at the end. That's why actually if you apply to all six, it's really a very wise mix of schools that will hopefully bear you fruit this year.
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