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by karthikpandian19 » Tue May 08, 2012 12:54 am
A peculiar feature of the embryonic mammalian circulatory system is that in the area of the heart the cells adhere to one another, beating in unison and adopting specialized orientations exclusive of one another.
(A) beating in unison and adopting
(B) they beat in unison while adopting
(C) beat in unison, and adopt
(D) beating in unison yet adopting
(E) even though they beat in unison and adopt
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by Bill@VeritasPrep » Tue May 08, 2012 6:34 am
A peculiar feature of the embryonic mammalian circulatory system is that in the area of the heart the cells adhere to one another, beating in unison and adopting specialized orientations exclusive of one another.

(A) beating in unison and adopting (no contrast)

(B) they beat in unison while adopting (not parallel)

(C) beat in unison, and adopt (no contrast and also creates a rudimentary sentence error)

(D) beating in unison yet adopting

(E) even though they beat in unison and adopt (no contrast)

We need something to indicate the contrast between the similarity (beating in unison) and difference (adopting specialized orientations exclusive...)
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by GmatKiss » Tue May 08, 2012 12:14 pm
imo: d
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by jordan23 » Wed May 09, 2012 8:04 am
To indicate contrast we need Yet here. Hence D.
karthikpandian19 wrote:A peculiar feature of the embryonic mammalian circulatory system is that in the area of the heart the cells adhere to one another, beating in unison and adopting specialized orientations exclusive of one another.
(A) beating in unison and adopting
(B) they beat in unison while adopting
(C) beat in unison, and adopt
(D) beating in unison yet adopting
(E) even though they beat in unison and adopt
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by karthikpandian19 » Wed May 09, 2012 10:04 pm
OA is D
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