Ancient Athens- GMAT prep

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Ancient Athens- GMAT prep

by blackarrow » Sun Aug 16, 2009 7:25 pm
Could someone please explain the difference between C & D.

Also why is one correct and other incorrect, please give me explainations if you can.

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by real2008 » Mon Aug 17, 2009 12:29 am
The difference, that i find, between c and d is the issue of verbosity. it is better to use 'robe with which they dressed' than to 'robe that they used to dress'

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