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Is this sentence correct?

by warlock » Wed Oct 08, 2008 10:02 am
Is the following sentence correct?

"A Position in a results oriented company, which seeks an ambitious and career conscious person whose acquired skills are utilized towards continued growth and advancement."

the first half makes sense but the second half is too complicated i guess..
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by stop@800 » Wed Oct 08, 2008 11:50 am
it is not a complete sentence.
It has just two phrases.
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by kris610 » Wed Oct 08, 2008 3:39 pm
The first part is a phrase, and the second part just contains two dependent clauses introduced by two pronouns 'which' and 'whose'. It is an incomplete sentence.
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by Bidisha800 » Wed Oct 08, 2008 6:30 pm
This has a subject and no verb or predicate.
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