ShukhratJon wrote:GMATGuruNY wrote:Generally, COMMA + VERBing serves to modify the nearest preceding action and the agent of this action.
Given this rule, I received a PM requesting that I justify the usage of COMMA + needing in the OA:
Insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators.
Here, the two colored portions serve not as an agent but as an OBJECT for the verb charge.
Question: WHAT do insurance companies charge?
Answer: They charge WHATEVER RATES THE MARKET WOULD BEAR.
Because the two colored portions do not serve as an agent -- the red portion is simply an adjective describing the blue portion -- it is clear that COMMA + needing refers not to the two colored portions but to INSURANCE COMPANIES (the agent of charge).
Mitch Sir,
What does prevent 'comma + needing' from modifying the nearest action
bear and its agent
market? That was the reason why I eliminated A, basing on the rule you mentioned. I would appreciate If you could elaborate on this. Thank you very much beforehand.
Insurance companies in California were free to charge whatever rates the market would bear, needing no approval from regulators.
Here, the portion in blue is a NOUN CLAUSE serving as the direct object of
to charge.
A noun clause functions as a single unit.
Generally, it is not possible for a nonessential modifier -- such as COMMA + VERBing -- to modify the individual components of a noun clause.
For this reason, it is clear that COMMA +
needing refers not to
would bear but to the preceding infinitive (
to charge) and to the agent of this infinitive (
insurance companies).
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