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Because of recent seismic activity all along the Bleisner

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by BTGmoderatorDC » Thu Jun 14, 2018 11:42 pm

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Because of recent seismic activity all along the Bleisner fault in the northern Pacific, environmental groups are concerned by offshore oil drilling and mineral exploration taking place in the immediate vicinity might exacerbate an already volatile situation.

A) environmental groups are concerned by offshore oil drilling and mineral exploration taking place

B) environmental groups are concerned that offshore oil drilling and mineral exploration taking place

C) a concern by environmental groups is that the offshore oil drilling and mineral exploring taking place

D) a concern of the environmental groups is the offshore oil drilling and mineral exploring taking place

E) environmental groups are concerned by the offshore oil drilling and mineral exploring taking place
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by deloitte247 » Thu Jun 21, 2018 12:46 pm
Here, we take a look at the multiple options with a view to picking the best fit among the array of options available.

In Option A - INCORRECT.
Here, we have a case of plagiarize response to a question raised and expected to be answered in other forms though still retaining its components meaning.

In Option B - INCORRECT.
Here, there's a case of word replacement. The preposition ''by'' is being replaced with a demonstrative pronoun ''that'' which doesn't apply really in the statement for the flow.

In Option C - CORRECT.
Here, the writer is telling us that there's a reservation by a particular group about the subject matter at hand. The component parts of the statement are in agreement with each other and thus makes it the correct option.

In Option D - INCORRECT.
''Concern of'' means the group have a responsibility which they must take care of. It doesn't flow with contextually because they are only raising people's awareness about the petrochemical process.

In Option E - INCORRECT.
Here, there is a proper flow just that the article ''the'' does not add any extra information to the subject matter. Clearly not enough to sway anyone.
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