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by BTGmoderatorRO » Sat Dec 23, 2017 2:30 am
According to a new study that is the first to explain the physics of animal self-drying, wet dogs and other wet animals shake their body in such a precise and effective manner that washing machine designers are taking notice of these.
A. wet dogs and other wet animals shake their body in such a precise and effective manner that washing machine designers are taking notice of these.
B. wet dogs and other wet animals are shaking their bodies in so precise and effective a manner that washing machine designers are taking notice of this.
C. wet dogs and other wet animals shakes their bodies in a precise and effective manner so as to cause washing machine designers to take notice of this.
D. wet dogs and other wet animals shake their bodies in such a precise and effective manner that washing machine designers are taking notice of this.
E. wet dogs and other wet animals shake its body with such a precise and effective manner that washing machine designer is taking notice of this

OA is D

Can an Expert give a breakdown of the parallelism in this sentence? Thanks in anticipation.
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