TheGraduate wrote:According to public health officials, in 1998 Massachusetts became the first state in which more babies were born to women over the age of thirty than under it.
in light of the above discussion, could the following be a correct option ? :
than were born
Proposed answer choice:
More babies were born to women over the age of thirty were born under it.
This sentence is not viable.
Here,
under it seems to be an ADVERB serving to modify
born.
As a result, the phrase in red implies that
babies were born under the age of thirty -- not the intended meaning.
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