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by Zoreca » Mon Aug 01, 2016 10:20 pm
Hi

Please review my profile below and provide your input/ suggestions on which school suits me the best (preferably top 10 MBA school in US or top 5 in Europe). Even better if you can advise my profile competitiveness on those top schools

Age: 27
Nationality:Indonesian

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Top 3 US public school, Economics major, 3.7/4.0

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Consultant in Deloitte Consulting - 4.5 years

GMAT: 700

Post MBA career:
Return to my country and focus on growing family business
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by Jon@Admissionado » Tue Aug 02, 2016 12:02 am
Hey there,
And good to hear from you!

Now, I'd LOVE to help you out and get down with your profile.

The thing is I am missing detail.

I need a LOT more info from you - school name, titles, promotions, greatest achievements, volunteer work, sports, community service, religious involvement, leadership.. etc. before I can give you a real evaluation.

It will also be very helpful if you can elaborate upon your goals.

Have a look at some of the other very detailed profile requests on this board and do something similar and I'll be happy to get back to you.

Additionally, I am very curious to hear more about your family business - how big is it in terms of number of employees? In terms of turnover? market share? What do you guys do? And what are the plans for the future?

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by Donna@Stratus » Tue Aug 02, 2016 6:04 am
Zoreca wrote:Hi
Hi @Zoreca,
Yes- glad to give you some feedback but first I have to agree that you need to share more- and also make a shift in thinking that it is not just a gumball machine where you put in inputs like GPA, GMAT and out pops a school! (If only it were so simple...) Is there a focus on what you'd like to learn to bring back to family business? Do you thrive most in a small class or large class environment? Do you find a big city or rural area is where you thrive? Answering these questions may help you narrow down schools to look at- I think overall your work experience and scores can make you a contender at most top 20 programs with more of a stretch at the top- but there are some great schools in that 10-20 range. And even some great stretch options for you. The way you will stand out anywhere is to have a bit more compelling info in your "why." If you want to share more, you can go to our website at StratusPrep.com and seek a free consult. Or feel free to provide more details and that will make it easier to narrow down schools to target. Congrats on the strong profile you have presented here. You are off to a great start!
Please review my profile below and provide your input/ suggestions on which school suits me the best (preferably top 10 MBA school in US or top 5 in Europe). Even better if you can advise my profile competitiveness on those top schools

Age: 27
Nationality:Indonesian

Undergrad
Top 3 US public school, Economics major, 3.7/4.0

Work Experience
Consultant in Deloitte Consulting - 4.5 years

GMAT: 700

Post MBA career:
Return to my country and focus on growing family business

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by Edison@VeritasPrep » Fri Aug 12, 2016 3:15 pm
Thanks for sharing.

Identifying specifics that you want to gain from the MBA program, and how it would help you post-MBA are important to show how you would benefit from attending these top schools. Showcasing your accomplishments and personal qualities would be necessary in distinguishing you from similarly qualified applicants.

You may be uncomfortable to show more personal details and about your family business in this forum, but in the application process, you would need to feel comfortable playing up your strengths, and sharing what motivates you and your ambitious plans. Admissions committees would need to know you on a more personal level and be convinced how you would benefit from an MBA at a top program.

All the best and look forward to receiving your updates.
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by Edison@VeritasPrep » Fri Aug 12, 2016 5:04 pm
You may also find some of the tips from the blog below helpful:

https://www.veritasprep.com/blog/2016/05 ... -and-back/

From the Family Business to Business School (and Back)

"You're going back to the family business?"


If you're planning to attend business school with the ultimate intent of working for your family's business, some of your friends will probably wonder why you would consider pursuing an MBA when they feel that a clear path has already been (very well) paved for you with the power, privilege, and prestige of your family's business handed to you on a silver platter. Some will envy you, some will resent you, and even more will wonder if you really need an MBA, while you yourself doubt how stating this post-MBA goal will affect your odds of admission.

Interestingly, articulating your personal story towards convince your friends of this decision may also be the same formula towards strengthening your case to getting admitted to your target schools. Let's examine three ways you can best explain to the Admissions Committee your plans to go from your family's business to business school, and back:

1) Win Admiration from Peers
Displaying your competence through your strong academic and job accomplishments, demonstrating your character through your work ethic and values, or showcasing how you have gotten involved with interesting and worthwhile activities will help show you as someone who can make it on their own. In turn, this display of independence - that you don't completely rely on your family to succeed - will work towards winning admiration and respect from your peers, and even your subordinates.

Imagine, sometime in the near future (perhaps your late 20's or early 30's), being introduced as the new General Manager of your family's business. Some whispers from your employees would surely be, "She's the daughter of the boss, that's why..." From your side, you would want them to also recognize how you have also excelled outside of the family business environment, whether it is at another company, or towards a specific social cause or interest. Similarly, explaining this desire to find your own success, independent of your family, will be a great way to explain your MBA aspirations to the Admissions Committee.

2) Acknowledge Your Good Fortune
In discussing your history in relation to your family's business, you would do well to be grateful for the circumstances you have been blessed with. This gratitude will serve as a good point to highlight the knowledge, exposure and network you are equipped with - attractive qualities that can benefit your future business school community, as well.

Mentioning specifics about your family's business to demonstrate its scale and potential impact not only shows your awareness and interest in the business, but also helps the Admissions Committee realize the impact you can make in the business world. Providing details on the products this company provides, or on its business model, will also help them visualize what you are involved with now, and how it can influence you as a future MBA.

3) Articulate Your Passion
Tell the Admissions Committee what you are excited to do after business school, such as leading the entry into a new market, launching a product line, building a distribution channel, or formulating new company plans. You can also share the challenges your family's business is currently facing - perhaps it is the need to modernize its systems and processes, or its struggle with the more personal aspects of succession planning or even family politics. Showing your focus and drive to achieve these specific post-MBA objectives - and explaining how attending business school will help you attain these goals - will further demonstrate your substance and maturity.

Relate these future plans and current challenges to your need for an MBA at your specific school of interest by identifying exactly what you aim to gain at their program and how you plan to bring it back to your family's business. Doing this will help convince the Admission Committee that you are the right fit for their program and deserving of a spot.
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