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by drgmatIL » Wed Sep 03, 2008 7:08 am
In January 1994 an oil barge ran aground off the coast of San Juan, Puerto Rico, leaking its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean, while causing the pollution of the city’s beaches.
A) leaking its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean, while causing the pollution of
B) with its cargo of 750000 gallons leaking into the ocean, and it polluted
C) and its cargo of 750000 gallons leaked into the ocean, polluting
D) while it leaked its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean and caused the pollution of
E) so that its cargo of 750000 gallons leaked into the ocean, and they were polluting


what's wrong with D?
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by mayur00 » Wed Sep 03, 2008 12:51 pm
IMO C
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by nitingupta5 » Wed Sep 03, 2008 12:56 pm
IMO C

What's the OA?
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by gmattestprep » Wed Sep 03, 2008 6:12 pm
IMO C
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by stubbornp » Thu Sep 04, 2008 9:13 pm
imo B
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Re: cargo

by anju » Fri Sep 05, 2008 7:02 pm
drgmatIL wrote:In January 1994 an oil barge ran aground off the coast of San Juan, Puerto Rico, leaking its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean, while causing the pollution of the city’s beaches.
A) leaking its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean, while causing the pollution of
B) with its cargo of 750000 gallons leaking into the ocean, and it polluted
C) and its cargo of 750000 gallons leaked into the ocean, polluting
D) while it leaked its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean and caused the pollution of
E) so that its cargo of 750000 gallons leaked into the ocean, and they were polluting
what's wrong with D?
IMO: C
"caused the pollution" of is unidiomatic in option D
The two events are happening together and hence a "and" should be used to join the two events oil barge "ran aground" and "leaked". Also, both these events led to pollution... which is clear from C
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