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by j_shreyans » Thu Jul 02, 2015 8:51 am
The exploding popularity of the newest generation of portable MP3 players, equipped with multiple gigabytes of memory and capable of displaying color video files, have generated a huge cottage industry to satisfy the growing demand of accessories for the players.

A) equipped with multiple gigabytes of memory and capable of displaying color video files, have generated a huge cottage industry to satisfy the growing demand of accessories for the players

B) equipped with multiple gigabytes of memory and capable of displaying color video files, has generated a huge cottage industry to satisfy the growing demand for accessories

C) being equipped with multiple gigabytes of memory and having the capability of displaying color video files, has generated a huge cottage industry to satisfy the growing demand for accessories for the players

D) equipped with multiple gigabytes of memory and with the capacity of displaying color video files, have generated a huge cottage industry to satisfy the growing demand of accessories

E) equipped with multiple gigabytes of memory and capable of displaying color video files, have generated a huge cottage industry to satisfy the growing demand for accessories

OAB

In OA equipped with multiple gigabytes of memory and capable of displaying color video files is this parallel because AND is used to compare the parallel things right?

Please advise and correct me.

Thanks.
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by akash singhal » Thu Jul 02, 2015 7:45 pm
j_shreyans wrote:The exploding popularity of the newest generation of portable MP3 players, equipped with multiple gigabytes of memory and capable of displaying color video files, have generated a huge cottage industry to satisfy the growing demand of accessories for the players.

A) equipped with multiple gigabytes of memory and capable of displaying color video files, have generated a huge cottage industry to satisfy the growing demand of accessories for the players

B) equipped with multiple gigabytes of memory and capable of displaying color video files, has generated a huge cottage industry to satisfy the growing demand for accessories

C) being equipped with multiple gigabytes of memory and having the capability of displaying color video files, has generated a huge cottage industry to satisfy the growing demand for accessories for the players

D) equipped with multiple gigabytes of memory and with the capacity of displaying color video files, have generated a huge cottage industry to satisfy the growing demand of accessories

E) equipped with multiple gigabytes of memory and capable of displaying color video files, have generated a huge cottage industry to satisfy the growing demand for accessories

OAB

In OA equipped with multiple gigabytes of memory and capable of displaying color video files is this parallel because AND is used to compare the parallel things right?

Please advise and correct me.

Thanks.
Well dont know about parallelism but you can simply remove A,D and E because of they use 'have' but it should be 'has'
Morever, C is sounding odd to me might be because of parallelism
Hope some1 else would shed some light on it.....
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