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by alltimeacheiver » Fri Aug 26, 2011 6:43 am
Although Modern rollercoasters have loops in which they turn upside-down, old fashioned roller coasters have more and longer straight drops

a Old -dashioned roller coaster have more and longer straight drops


c whereas old fashioned roller coaster have more and longer straight drops

I choose c but the option is a one why
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by aspirant2011 » Fri Aug 26, 2011 6:45 am
alltimeacheiver wrote:Although Modern rollercoasters have loops in which they turn upside-down, old fashioned roller coasters have more and longer straight drops

a Old -dashioned roller coaster have more and longer straight drops


c whereas old fashioned roller coaster have more and longer straight drops

I choose c but the option is a one why
C is wrong because in the initial part of the sentence you have already used transition word Although,therefore, we don't require any other transition word over here, for example, in the above sentence whereas
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by alltimeacheiver » Fri Aug 26, 2011 6:49 am
correct thanks
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by GmatKiss » Fri Aug 26, 2011 11:42 am
I agree with aspirant2011 :)

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by mpramodravishankar » Sat Sep 06, 2014 6:39 pm
In Option C
whereas old-fashioned roller coaster have more and longer straight drops

If you see "Coaster" is singular and "have" is plural
M Pramod Ravi Shankar
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