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profile evaluation for US b schools

by piku9290 » Wed Aug 07, 2013 10:56 am
Hello ,

here is my profile in brief-

GMAT - 680 (Q 49 V 32)
GPA- 6.74/10 (First Class)

Professional Experience
Junior Manager ( Operation ) , JSW Steel Ltd.
Role and achievements -
"¢ As an Operation Shift In-charge , led a team of 45 persons including engineers ,operators , supervisors and housekeeping personnel
"¢ Subjected to extensive team work and leadership experiences ,and achieved a production of 107% of the business target for 8 month in the financial year 2012-13
"¢ Designed , commissioned and executed the operation of Effluent Treatment Plant , thereby reducing the consumption of process water by 85%
"¢ Ensured implementation of safety regulation inside and outside the plant and achieved one million man hour without any reportable injuries consecutively for seven months in the year 2012-13
"¢ Instituted performance management and employee review process across the organization for the associate and contract employees
"¢ Successfully coordinated with external agencies to manage production delay during breakdowns of machinery and to give periodic shutdown for preventive maintenance , thereby reducing the effective delay of production by 348 hours in the year 2012-13

Voluntary work
"¢ JSW Foundation (March 2013- present): Volunteered ,took initiative in plantation of a tree for one tonne of steel produced and established 'Self Help Group' to promote women empowerment
"¢ NIT Durgapur NSS unit (August 2009-February 2011) : organised free medical check-up for slums dwellers , initiated 'Bihari More project' for slum's children , assisted them by providing free books and school accessories
"¢ Scout and Guide Program (April 2003-March 2007) : involved in cleaning of river banks and local community centres, spreading awareness against dowry , environment pollution and STDs by making and distributing pamphlet in the community.

Extra curricular activities
"¢ Organised safety mock drills in JSW coke oven plant. Awarded certificate of Safety engineer
"¢ Participated in All India Junior Mathematics Olympiad and awarded merit certificate for scoring 83% marks
"¢ Received merit scholarship of INR 10000 per semester for excellent result at school level.
"¢ Raised a sponsorship of INR 20000 from Nvidia and IOCL to organise online gaming competition in NIT Durgapur during technical fest ' Arohan' .

Post MBA goals :
short term - to take up higher management position in a manufacturing industry
long term - to become director of operation in a manufacturing industry

Specialisation - Operation management or Supply Chain management

Target schools -
1. Penn State - Smeal
2. Purdue Krannert
3. Texas- Mays
4. Michigan state Broad
5. Arizona state
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by Jon@Admissionado » Fri Aug 09, 2013 1:10 am
Hello there,
I like your profile! You have a tremendous amount of leadership, which is fantastic, and hopefully you can pull some amazing stories from your experience as a team leader to use for your essays. I also think that your school list is quite reasonable, maybe even a bit on the modest side (you could also maybe add Tepper and McCombs to your list, Rice as well).

Also have a look at the rankings for Supply Chain management programs: https://premium.usnews.com/best-graduate ... s-rankings.

Revolve most of your profile around three things: leadership, leadership and leadership, and I think with your list you should see some nice results.
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