Adapted spaces

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Adapted spaces

by DROBULESH » Mon Aug 11, 2008 9:58 pm
Those who come to church with a predisposition to religious belief will be happy in an auditorium or even a storefront, and there is no doubt that religion is sometimes better served by adapted spaces of this kind instead of by some of the buildings actually designed for it.
(A) adapted spaces of this kind instead of by some of the buildings actually designed for it
(B) adapted spaces like these rather than some of the buildings actually designed for them
(C) these adapted spaces instead of by some of the buildings actually designed for it
(D) such adapted spaces rather than by some of the buildings actually designed for them
(E) such adapted spaces than by some of the buildings actually designed for it
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by Vignesh.4384 » Tue Aug 12, 2008 4:54 am
IMO E

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by raunekk » Tue Aug 12, 2008 5:07 am
IMO:D

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"Parallelism" and "subject-pronoun agreement"

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by ildude02 » Tue Aug 12, 2008 9:04 am
IMO E.

Them doesn't agree with the singular form of religion.

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by gmatmachoman » Tue Aug 12, 2008 9:22 am
My Answer in Option A.

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by raunekk » Tue Aug 12, 2008 11:07 am
sorry,
i would be E..


i thought "them" to they , infact it refers to "religion"

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by NSNguyen » Wed Aug 13, 2008 6:49 am
IMO: C
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rest : error pronoun
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Re: Adapted spaces

by Stockmoose16 » Wed Aug 13, 2008 10:48 am
DROBULESH wrote:Those who come to church with a predisposition to religious belief will be happy in an auditorium or even a storefront, and there is no doubt that religion is sometimes better served by adapted spaces of this kind instead of by some of the buildings actually designed for it.
(A) adapted spaces of this kind instead of by some of the buildings actually designed for it
(B) adapted spaces like these rather than some of the buildings actually designed for them
(C) these adapted spaces instead of by some of the buildings actually designed for it
(D) such adapted spaces rather than by some of the buildings actually designed for them
(E) such adapted spaces than by some of the buildings actually designed for it
What's the OA?

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by stubbornp » Wed Aug 13, 2008 9:19 pm
IMO E....

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