common symptoms of stomach flu

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common symptoms of stomach flu

by skamal7 » Tue Jun 25, 2013 6:15 am
I wanted to know what is the difference in the two sentences
common symptoms of stomach flu are indigestion,vomitting and drinking less water than usual--wrong
common symptoms of stomach flu are indigestion,vomitting and decreased water intake--- correct

Please can someone shed light on these two examples why first one is wrong and second one is right
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by faraz_jeddah » Tue Jun 25, 2013 10:35 am
skamal7 wrote:I wanted to know what is the difference in the two sentences
common symptoms of stomach flu are indigestion,vomitting and drinking less water than usual--wrong
common symptoms of stomach flu are indigestion,vomitting and decreased water intake--- correct

Please can someone shed light on these two examples why first one is wrong and second one is right
Can you post the whole question?

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by melguy » Sat Jun 29, 2013 4:37 am
skamal7 wrote:I wanted to know what is the difference in the two sentences
common symptoms of stomach flu are indigestion,vomitting and drinking less water than usual--wrong
common symptoms of stomach flu are indigestion,vomitting and decreased water intake--- correct

Please can someone shed light on these two examples why first one is wrong and second one is right
Standard noun > the noun + ing > noun + ing
Study > the studying > studying

** > means better than not greater than in the above sentences :P **

In this case standard noun is available to us hence is preferred.

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