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by zagcollins » Tue Jul 22, 2008 8:00 am
Responding to the public’s fascination with-and sometimes undue alarm over-possible threats from asteroids, a scale developed by astronomers rates the likelihood that a particular asteroid or comet may collide with Earth.

A. a scale developed by astronomers rates the likelihood that a particular asteroid or comet may
B. a scale that astronomers have developed rates how likely it is for a particular asteroid or comet to
C. astronomers have developed a scale to rate how likely a particular asteroid or comet will be to
D. astronomers have developed a scale for rating the likelihood that a particular asteroid or comet will
E. astronomers have developed a scale that rates the likelihood of a particular asteroid or comet that may.

OA is C
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by Dante » Tue Jul 22, 2008 8:10 am
I go with C (will looks bad)

E also looks fine (but feel to is required). Please clarify.
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by ricky » Tue Jul 22, 2008 8:25 am
IMO c.
E is undiomatic and changes the meaning of original sentence

What is OA?
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by reachac » Tue Jul 22, 2008 9:02 am
IMO D
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by lvincy » Tue Jul 22, 2008 10:05 am
I will go with D
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by kiranlegend » Tue Jul 22, 2008 10:14 am
IMO D.. what's OA?
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by Vignesh.4384 » Tue Jul 22, 2008 6:08 pm
Hi,

IMO D.

C does not seem to be a good option.
between D and E .. D maintains parallelism..
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by rolodex » Tue Jul 22, 2008 7:32 pm
IMO C

C. commet will be likely to collide .................. (this is the right way)
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by ildude02 » Tue Jul 22, 2008 7:59 pm
C is my pick. I think using "will" in D along with the word "likelyhood" which means it's not certain is not correct. The word that fits the "uncertain" event is "may" . E changes the meaning to say that sclae rates its self instead of C which says, scale is "used" to rate. Not sure if my reasoning is OK.
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by Aldiablo » Tue Jul 22, 2008 10:48 pm
IMO C.

AB wrong modifier

D changes meaning from comets may collide to comets will collide.

E 'that' should be have been 'which'.
When you think you can or you cannot, you are generally correct.
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by Vignesh.4384 » Wed Jul 23, 2008 2:01 am
Hi ,

Why do u need the word may here ? the word likelihood intrinsically that it might or might not collide ..
so i thought we could do away with that word may.

Please correct me if i am wrong.

Regards,
vignesh
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by Aldiablo » Wed Jul 23, 2008 3:16 am
Vignesh.4384 wrote:Hi ,

Why do u need the word may here ? the word likelihood intrinsically that it might or might not collide ..
so i thought we could do away with that word may.

Please correct me if i am wrong.

Regards,
vignesh

Basic skeleton is like -
measure likelihood of X that may do Y.

So likelihood does not necessarily mean that it may not collide. So 'may' is required. IMO.
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