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by B166418 » Sat Oct 27, 2012 2:36 am
The structures designed by Ralph C. Harris were fifteen- and seventeen-story buildings, and for their time, were some of the larger and more luxurious hotels and residences in existence.
A. time, were some of the larger and more luxurious hotels and residences
B. era, they were some of the larger and more luxurious hotels and residences
C. era, were some of the largest and more luxurious hotels and residences
D. time, they were some of the largest and most luxurious hotels and residences
E. era, were some of the largely and more luxuriously hotels and residences
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by anuprajan5 » Sat Oct 27, 2012 7:50 am
Answer D

A. time, were some of the larger and more luxurious hotels and residences - Comparison issue - larger than what?
B. era, they were some of the larger and more luxurious hotels and residences - Comparison issue - larger than what?
C. era, were some of the largest and more luxurious hotels and residences - USe of era seems off to me plus the second part seems to be missing a reference to the buildings.
D. time, they were some of the largest and most luxurious hotels and residences - Perfect
E. era, were some of the largely and more luxuriously hotels and residences - Largely and more luxuriously. Changes meaning and seems nonsensical
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by B166418 » Sat Oct 27, 2012 8:51 pm
Hi..
Answer is D
but isn't it They In option D is ambiguous as it can refer to structures also
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by anuprajan5 » Sat Oct 27, 2012 9:42 pm
Lesser of evils again. I could forego the they in the last part of the sentence but the comparison issue is prevalent through the other answer choices.
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