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by [email protected] » Wed Jul 11, 2012 11:32 am
One of the most influential works by modern historians << is 'A Study of History' by Arnold Toynbee, which, in twelve volumes and published >> between 1934 and 1961.

(A)
is 'A Study of History' by Arnold Toynbee, which, in twelve volumes and published


(B)
is 'A Study of History' by Arnold Toynbee, in twelve volumes and published


(C)
'A Study of History' by Arnold Toynbee, being in twelve volumes and published


(D)
is 'A Study of History', which is in twelve volumes and published


(E)
'A Study of History' by Arnold Toynbee is in twelve volumes, published
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by mv12 » Wed Jul 11, 2012 12:47 pm
One of the most influential works by modern historians is 'A Study of History' by Arnold Toynbee, which, in twelve volumes and published between 1934 and 1961.

(A)
is 'A Study of History' by Arnold Toynbee, which, in twelve volumes and published


(B)
is 'A Study of History' by Arnold Toynbee, in twelve volumes and published


(C)
'A Study of History' by Arnold Toynbee, being in twelve volumes and published


(D)
is 'A Study of History', which is in twelve volumes and published


(E)
'A Study of History' by Arnold Toynbee is in twelve volumes, published

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by mv12 » Wed Jul 11, 2012 12:49 pm
Should be D.

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by Gabbar@750+ » Wed Jul 11, 2012 9:54 pm
The opening requires a verb to be followed i.e IS and so C and E are OUT.

A and B are because B is run on and A is awkward usage

OA is D

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by patanjali.purpose » Wed Jul 11, 2012 10:24 pm
[email protected] wrote:One of the most influential works by modern historians << is 'A Study of History' by Arnold Toynbee, which, in twelve volumes and published >> between 1934 and 1961.

(A)is 'A Study of History' by Arnold Toynbee, which, in twelve volumes and published
(B)is 'A Study of History' by Arnold Toynbee, in twelve volumes and published
(C)'A Study of History' by Arnold Toynbee, being in twelve volumes and published
(D)is 'A Study of History', which is in twelve volumes and published
(E)'A Study of History' by Arnold Toynbee is in twelve volumes, published
X AND Y - here X and Y should be parallel
A/B/D- in twelve volumes (PREP PH) and published (CONJUGATED VERB)
C- (being)in twelve volumes (PREP PH) and published (CONJUGATED VERB)
E remains.

Other issues:
C - lacks IS (so its a fragment); being IMPLIES STUDY/PUBLISHING IS STILL ON

More important issue is BOOK IN 12 VOLUMES and PUBLISHED are not PARALLEL ACTIVITIES {that means, The most influential works by modern historians is 'A Study of History' by Arnold Toynbee in twelve volumes AND (THE...TOYNBEE) PUBLISHED are independent activities, but in reality the work is done and then published, We do not do the work and parallelly publish it} This means PUBLISHED should be used a MODIFIER . Only E satisfies.

IMO E

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by [email protected] » Sun Jul 15, 2012 12:46 am
Great Thanks!
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