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by GmatKiss » Tue May 15, 2012 12:15 pm
It was an increase in reported cases of malaria along the Gulf Coast that in 1921 led the health authorities' granting a permit for experimentation with human subjects to the group that later would be called by the name of Unimedco.

  (A) authorities' granting a permit for experimentation with human subjects to the group that later would be called by the name of

  (B) authorities' granting a permit for experimentation with human subjects to the group that later to be called by the name of

  (C) authorities' granting a permit for experimentation using human subjects to the group that later would be called by the name of

  (D) authorities to grant a permit for human experimentation to the group later called

  (E) authorities to grant a permit for human experimentation to the group that later would be called by the name of
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by gmatblood » Tue May 15, 2012 12:37 pm
IMO: C
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by nimi_vora » Tue May 15, 2012 5:50 pm
IMO D
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by alex.gellatly » Tue May 15, 2012 6:38 pm
I'll go with D, although I'm not very confident. What's the OA? And could maybe an expert comment?
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by ice_rush » Tue May 15, 2012 7:26 pm
(D) seems fine.
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by Bill@VeritasPrep » Tue May 15, 2012 7:32 pm
A and B both use the expression "led...for" which doesn't make sense in this context. The sentence is saying that the increase in malaria cases caused the health authorities to take action; we should use "led to" to make this clear.

C does not give us a linking preposition at all. ("led authorities' granting a permit...")

D and E both have "led...to...", which works. E is much wordier: "that later would be called by the name of" as compared to D's "later called." D is the better choice.
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by GmatKiss » Wed May 16, 2012 12:15 am
OA is D
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by Gaurav 2013-fall » Wed May 16, 2012 12:25 am
IMO D
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