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by fangtray » Mon May 14, 2012 12:22 am
Today's technology allows manufacturers to make |small cars more fuel-efficient now than at any time in their| production history.

a.
b. small cars that are more fuel-efficient than they were at any time in their
c. small cars that are more fuel-efficient than those at any other time in
d. more fuel-efficient small cars than those at any other time in their
e. more fuel-efficient small cars now than at any time in
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by GmatKiss » Mon May 14, 2012 12:40 am
IMO: C
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by ranjeet75 » Mon May 14, 2012 8:44 am
I think E
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by veenitj » Mon May 14, 2012 9:00 am
My ans is C.
E distorts the meaning....corect me if I am wrong
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by LalaB » Mon May 14, 2012 9:08 am
ranjeet75 wrote:I think E
E is not ok, since u have already the word "today", but at the same time u try to use the word "now". they are similar in the meaning.
u dont say -today I am here now.
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by fangtray » Mon May 14, 2012 6:12 pm
LalaB wrote:
ranjeet75 wrote:I think E
E is not ok, since u have already the word "today", but at the same time u try to use the word "now". they are similar in the meaning.
u dont say -today I am here now.
good find Lala. OA is C. I wonder if there is anything else wrong with E though.
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by bubbliiiiiiii » Tue May 15, 2012 4:15 am
Can someone explain the pronoun usage in B and C?
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by sam2304 » Tue May 15, 2012 4:51 am
A - 'their' is ambiguous can refer to cars/manufacturers. 'Now' is redundant
B - same error as above 'their' is ambiguous
D - 'their' is ambiguous
E - 'now' is redundant
D/E - more fuel efficient small cars - number of fuel efficient small cars is greater, whereas actual meaning is small cars that are more fuel efficient - fuel efficiency is higher - there is a difference in meaning. The original sentence gives importance to fuel efficiency while D/E gives importance number of fuel efficient cars. Stick to original so eliminate these.

IMO C.
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