Modifiers and subclause

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Modifiers and subclause

by karthikpandian19 » Tue May 08, 2012 12:28 am
A controversial figure throughout most of his public life, the Black leader Marcus Garvey advocated that some Blacks return to Africa, the land that, to him, symbolized the possibility of freedom.
(A) that some Blacks return to Africa, the land that, to him, symbolized the possibility of freedom
(B) that some Blacks return to the African land symbolizing the possibility of freedom to him
(C) that some Blacks return to Africa which was the land which symbolized the possibility of freedom to him
(D) some Black's returning to Africa which was the land that to him symbolized the possibility of freedom
(E) some Black's return to the land symbolizing the possibility of freedom to him, Africa
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by GmatKiss » Tue May 08, 2012 11:46 am
IMO: A

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by spartacus1412 » Tue May 08, 2012 8:18 pm
B, C , E alter the meaning of the sentence.

D is verbose

IMO A
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by karthikpandian19 » Wed May 09, 2012 10:25 pm
OA is A,

Can you explain what is a verbose???
spartacus1412 wrote:B, C , E alter the meaning of the sentence.

D is verbose

IMO A

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