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by karthikpandian19 » Tue May 08, 2012 12:31 am
A Labor Department study states that the numbers of women employed outside the home grew by more than a thirty-five percent increase in the past decade and accounted for more than sixty-two percent of the total growth in the civilian work force.
(A) numbers of women employed outside the home grew by more than a thirty-five percent increase
(B) numbers of women employed outside the home grew more than thirty-five percent
(C) numbers of women employed outside the home were raised by more than thirty-five percent
(D) number of women employed outside the home increased by more than thirty-five percent
(E) number of women employed outside the home was raised by more than a thirty-five percent increase
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by Bill@VeritasPrep » Tue May 08, 2012 7:13 am
A, B, and C all use "numbers" when we are referring to a singular statistic.

E uses the unidiomatic constructions "number...was raised by more than a 35% increase" whereas D uses "number...increased by more than 35%" correctly
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by GmatKiss » Tue May 08, 2012 10:01 am
karthikpandian19 wrote:A Labor Department study states that the numbers of women employed outside the home grew by more than a thirty-five percent increase in the past decade and accounted for more than sixty-two percent of the total growth in the civilian work force.
(A) numbers of women employed outside the home grew by more than a thirty-five percent increase
(B) numbers of women employed outside the home grew more than thirty-five percent
(C) numbers of women employed outside the home were raised by more than thirty-five percent
(D) number of women employed outside the home increased by more than thirty-five percent
(E) number of women employed outside the home was raised by more than a thirty-five percent increase
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by karthikpandian19 » Wed May 09, 2012 9:30 pm
OA is D
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