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by torofish » Sun Feb 01, 2009 7:58 am
Like Rousseau, Tolstoi rebelled against the unnatural complexity of human relations in modern society.

A. Like Rousseau, Tolstoi rebelled
B. Like Rousseau, Tolstio's rebellion was
C. As Rousseau, Tolstoi rebelled
D. As did Rousseau, Tolstoi's rebellion was
E. Tolstoi's rebellion, as Rousseau's, was

I chose "E"
but the answer was "A" :(

Why is it so?
I think E is better in the sense that it even has "as Rousseau's", so that it's even more precise!

please help
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by rahulakacyrus » Sun Feb 01, 2009 8:43 am
Like Rousseau, Tolstoi rebelled against the unnatural complexity of human relations in modern society.

A. Like Rousseau, Tolstoi rebelled
B. Like Rousseau, Tolstio's rebellion was
C. As Rousseau, Tolstoi rebelled
D. As did Rousseau, Tolstoi's rebellion was
E. Tolstoi's rebellion, as Rousseau's, was

E is incorrect because Tolstoi's rebellion is compared to Rousseau...
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by satish.nagdev » Sun Feb 01, 2009 11:17 pm
Its both Rousseau, Tolstoi who rebelled against .... and not their rebellions who were against....

e.g. Sarah is a rebellion child
Students rebelled against new union in college.
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by raunekk » Mon Feb 02, 2009 1:49 am
its as simple as...


"like" introduces nouns..

"as" introduces clauses...

In E rebellion is a noun...

as cannot introduce a noun...


hence A

i hope this helps.
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by abcdefg » Mon Jul 20, 2009 4:18 pm
"as" introduces clauses. what about statement d?

"As did Rousseau, Tolstoi's rebellion was"...
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by Domnu » Mon Jul 20, 2009 7:26 pm
Tolstoi's rebellion is being compared to what Rousseau did. You can't "do" a rebellion.
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by viju9162 » Mon Jul 20, 2009 9:34 pm
We are comparing two nouns here. Rousseau and Tolstoi, hence Like will be used!
"Native of" is used for a individual while "Native to" is used for a large group
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by dhonu121 » Wed Apr 18, 2012 9:19 am
Hi,
In reference to option C as wrong, will I be correct in stating the following ?

Tolstoi rebelled against the unnatural complexity of human relaitons in modern society as Rousseau.

And will I be correct in stating the following as well ?

Tolstoi rebelled against the unnatural complexity of human relaitons in modern society like Rousseau.

Please explain your reasoning.
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