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by oopsii » Tue Apr 17, 2012 11:43 pm
Laboratory mice and rats live up to 40 % longer than usual when fed a diet of at least 30 % fewer calories than that which they would normally eat, but that otherwise contains all necessary vitamins and nutrients.

A. of at least 30 % fewer calories than that which they would normally eat, but that otherwise
B.with at least 30% fewer calories than what they would normally eat though otherwise it
C.that has at least 30% fewer of the calories that they would normally eat, but otherwise it
D.that has at least 30% fewer calories than they would normally eat but that otherwise
E. that has at least 30% fewer calories than that which they would normally eat,though that otherwise.

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by bubbliiiiiiii » Tue Apr 17, 2012 11:53 pm
oopsii wrote:Laboratory mice and rats live up to 40 % longer than usual when fed a diet of at least 30 % fewer calories than that which they would normally eat, but that otherwise contains all necessary vitamins and nutrients.

A. of at least 30 % fewer calories than that which they would normally eat, but that otherwise - lacks parallelism
B.with at least 30% fewer calories than what they would normally eat though otherwise it - improper modifier!
C.that has at least 30% fewer of the calories that they would normally eat, but otherwise it - awkward sentence framing
D.that has at least 30% fewer calories than they would normally eat but that otherwise - improper comparison
E. that has at least 30% fewer calories than that which they would normally eat,though that otherwise.

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IMO E
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by killer1387 » Wed Apr 18, 2012 12:08 am
Laboratory mice and rats live up to 40 % longer than usual when fed a diet of at least 30 % fewer calories than that which they would normally eat, but that otherwise contains all necessary vitamins and nutrients.

A. of at least 30 % fewer calories than that which they would normally eat, but that otherwise
B.with at least 30% fewer calories than what they would normally eat though otherwise it
C.that has at least 30% fewer of the calories that they would normally eat, but otherwise it
D.that has at least 30% fewer calories than they would normally eat but that otherwise
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E. that has at least 30% fewer calories than that which they would normally eat,though that otherwise.

i will go with D

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by GmatKiss » Wed Apr 18, 2012 1:20 am
I will go with Killer, IMO: D

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by jordan23 » Wed Apr 18, 2012 2:53 am
I will go with D.
A) of at least 30% calories ... not correct usage
B) ambiguous reference using IT
C) ambiguous reference using IT
D) Correct
E) Incorrect use of Which.


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