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by heymayank08 » Sat Apr 14, 2012 8:29 pm
The man was always aware, sometimes proudly and sometimes resentfully, that he was a small-town Midwesterner who was thrust into a world that was dominated by wealthier, better-educated, and more polished people than him.
(A) who was thrust into a world that was dominated by wealthier, better-educated, and more polished people than him
(B) who had been thrust into a world that was dominated by more wealthy, educated, and polished people than him
(C) who had been thrust into a world dominated by wealthier, better-educated, and people more polished than he was
(D) thrust into a world dominated by more wealthy, educated, and polished people than him
(E) thrust into a world dominated by wealthier, better-educated, and more polished people than he

[spoiler]OA: E[/spoiler]


pls explain
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by sam2304 » Sat Apr 14, 2012 9:36 pm
A/B/C - 'who' is not close to the noun it modifies.
D - more wealthy is wrong

IMO E. than he seems awkward to me but it the best among all maybe he (was) is implied in the sentence, if that is the case then its perfectly fine.
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by GmatKiss » Sat Apr 14, 2012 10:49 pm
The man was always aware, sometimes proudly and sometimes resentfully, that he was a small-town Midwesterner who was thrust into a world that was dominated by wealthier, better-educated, and more polished people than him.
(A) who was thrust into a world that was dominated by wealthier, better-educated, and more polished people than him
(B) who had been thrust into a world that was dominated by more wealthy, educated, and polished people than him
(C) who had been thrust into a world dominated by wealthier, better-educated, and people more polished than he was
(D) thrust into a world dominated by more wealthy, educated, and polished people than him
(E) thrust into a world dominated by wealthier, better-educated, and more polished people than he(him/he was)

IMO: E
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