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by heymayank08 » Mon Mar 26, 2012 9:14 am
One of four babies are now born to mothers aged thirty years or more, compared with just one of six born in 1975.
(A) of four babies are now born to mothers aged thirty years or more, compared with just one of six born
(B) of four babies is now born to a mother whose age is thirty or older, compared to just one of six babies who were born
(C) baby in four are now born to mothers aged thirty or older, compared to just one in six
(D) baby in four is now born to a mother aged thirty or older, compared with just one in six
(E) baby in four is now born to mothers aged thirty years or more, compared to just one in six


[spoiler]OA D[/spoiler]

pls explain how to tackle this sentence.... :)
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by sam2304 » Mon Mar 26, 2012 10:04 am
A/C - One of X are - wrong SV error.
B - who were born - not necessary or redundant though its grammatically right.
E - aged thirty years - redundant, thirty years or more - wrong, we need older here.

IMO D

We are comparing # babies born now and in 1975. D does it very clearly and concisely. Moreover we use compare with for similar things and compare to for unlike things but its interchangeable now - experts thoughts.
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by heymayank08 » Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:36 am
can u pls throw some light on the use of a mother and mothers used in this sentence pls... :)
sam2304 wrote:A/C - One of X are - wrong SV error.
B - who were born - not necessary or redundant though its grammatically right.
E - aged thirty years - redundant, thirty years or more - wrong, we need older here.

IMO D

We are comparing # babies born now and in 1975. D does it very clearly and concisely. Moreover we use compare with for similar things and compare to for unlike things but its interchangeable now - experts thoughts.
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by sam2304 » Tue Mar 27, 2012 9:36 am
One baby has only one mother. I am not very sure about this but it seems illogical. One baby is born to mothers seems totally awkward.

In other words 25% of babies born to a mother aged thirty is what it implies in D whereas in E - 25 % of babies born to mothers - awkward.
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