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by gmatblood » Thu Oct 20, 2011 9:55 am
"To tackle the issue of congressional campaign spending is becoming embroiled in a war which is raging between those who support public financing with those who would lift the limitson the amount political parties and individuals may donate"

A
B.Becoming embroiled in a war raging among those who support public financing with
c.to become embroiled in a war raging between those who support public financing and
D.to become embroiled in a war which is raging between those who support public financing and
E.becoming embroiled in a war which is raging between those who support public financing and

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by GmatKiss » Thu Oct 20, 2011 9:58 am
IMO:C
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by aspirant2011 » Thu Oct 20, 2011 10:05 am
gmatblood wrote:"To tackle the issue of congressional campaign spending is becoming embroiled in a war which is raging between those who support public financing with those who would lift the limitson the amount political parties and individuals may donate"

A becoming embroiled in a war which is raging between those who support public financing with
B.Becoming embroiled in a war raging among those who support public financing with
c.to become embroiled in a war raging between those who support public financing and
D.to become embroiled in a war which is raging between those who support public financing and
E.becoming embroiled in a war which is raging between those who support public financing and

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I will also go with C....
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by indi » Thu Oct 20, 2011 5:20 pm
IMO C
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by bharti06 » Thu Oct 20, 2011 10:20 pm
gmatblood wrote:"To tackle the issue of congressional campaign spending is becoming embroiled in a war which is raging between those who support public financing with those who would lift the limitson the amount political parties and individuals may donate"

A
B.Becoming embroiled in a war raging among those who support public financing with
c.to become embroiled in a war raging between those who support public financing and
D.to become embroiled in a war which is raging between those who support public financing and
E.becoming embroiled in a war which is raging between those who support public financing and

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IMO -

A: between.....with - wrong
B: among should only be used for more than 3 items...hence wrong here
D: a war which is ranging is wordy....a war ranging is more appropraite
E: same as D
C: to tackle is parallel with to become....and correct use of the idiom between....and also it rectifies the error of D. so IMO should be C.
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by sam2304 » Fri Oct 21, 2011 1:20 am
Agree with bharti06. IMO C.

Usage of between is right in C D E. D E uses which - becomes wordy. A uses among for comparing two things.
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by afbg2003 » Fri Oct 21, 2011 11:25 am
IMO C?
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by afbg2003 » Fri Oct 21, 2011 11:25 am
IMO C.
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by [email protected] » Thu Nov 03, 2011 3:49 am
I think it is E...

I think that C change the meaning - IS TO BECOME shows the obligation to become.

gmatblood, why don't you post the OA?
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