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by Dean Jones » Sat Oct 22, 2011 12:34 am
Hi friends,

Below is a question I'm finding difficulty in answering.
Please help.

The author Herman Melville and the poet Walt Whitman are icons of American literature,
greatly beloved by generations past and present.

"¢ The author Herman Melville and the poet Walt Whitman are icons
"¢ Herman Melville the author and Walt Whitman the poet are icons
"¢ The author named Herman Melville and the poet named Walt Whitman are great icons
"¢ The author, Herman Melville, and the poet, Walt Whitman, are icons
"¢ Herman Melville, the author, and Walt Whitman, the poet, had been icons


Please help.

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by mukgera » Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:36 am
IMO E.
"greatly beloved by generations past and present."
Should be using had been here as past and present both are involved.

Dean Jones wrote:Hi friends,

Below is a question I'm finding difficulty in answering.
Please help.

The author Herman Melville and the poet Walt Whitman are icons of American literature,
greatly beloved by generations past and present.

"¢ The author Herman Melville and the poet Walt Whitman are icons
"¢ Herman Melville the author and Walt Whitman the poet are icons
"¢ The author named Herman Melville and the poet named Walt Whitman are great icons
"¢ The author, Herman Melville, and the poet, Walt Whitman, are icons
"¢ Herman Melville, the author, and Walt Whitman, the poet, had been icons


Please help.

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by zooki » Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:46 am
A. Don't see any mistake.
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by aspirant2011 » Sat Oct 22, 2011 6:57 am
Dean Jones wrote:Hi friends,

Below is a question I'm finding difficulty in answering.
Please help.

The author Herman Melville and the poet Walt Whitman are icons of American literature,
greatly beloved by generations past and present.

The author Herman Melville and the poet Walt Whitman are icons
"¢ Herman Melville the author and Walt Whitman the poet are icons
The author named Herman Melville and the poet named Walt Whitman are great icons
The author, Herman Melville, and the poet, Walt Whitman, are icons---- unnecessary fragments
"¢ Herman Melville, the author, and Walt Whitman, the poet, had been icons


Please help.

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by mankey » Sat Oct 22, 2011 10:10 am
A for me.

What is the OA?

Thanks.
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by Dean Jones » Sun Oct 23, 2011 11:07 am
OA is A. I wanted to know the problem with option D. Can anyone help?
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by krishnakumar.ks » Sun Oct 23, 2011 11:50 am
OA is A. I wanted to know the problem with option D. Can anyone help?
D is quoting a list of four people here namely the author, Melville, the poet, and Whitman. It changes the original sentence which talks about only two people.
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by cyrwr1 » Sun Oct 23, 2011 2:34 pm
Choice D changes the question to 3 people: Author,Melville , and Whitman
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by Jim@Grockit » Sun Oct 23, 2011 3:41 pm
I agree with cyrwr1 -- grammatically, D lists three people. One would expect "the author Herman Melville" in the initial position.
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