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by shrutee » Tue Oct 04, 2011 2:34 am
The ability of scientists to provide models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing condition,like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions,have become more accurate.

A)
B)The ability of scientist has become ever more accurate in provided models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing cond" such as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions.

c)Scientists have become able to provide more accurate models of the atmosphere's complex responses to such changing conditions as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions.

D)Scientist have become ever more accurate in their ability for providing models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing conditions,like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions

E)Scientists' ability to provide models of the atmosphere's complex response to such changing condition as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions have become evr more accurate
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by HSPA » Tue Oct 04, 2011 2:44 am
shrutee wrote:The ability of scientists to provide models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing condition,like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions,have become more accurate.

A)
B)The ability of scientist has become ever more accurate in provided models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing cond" such as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions.

c)Scientists have become able to provide more accurate models of the atmosphere's complex responses to such changing conditions as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions.

D)Scientist have become ever more accurate in their ability for providing models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing conditions,like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions

E)Scientists' ability to provide models of the atmosphere's complex response to such changing condition as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions have become evr more accurate
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by HSPA » Tue Oct 04, 2011 2:47 am
C looks some what okay among all
HSPA wrote:
shrutee wrote:The ability of scientists to provide models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing condition,like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions,have become more accurate.

A)
B)The ability of scientist has become ever more accurate in provided models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing cond" such as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions.

c)Scientists have become able to provide more accurate models of the atmosphere's complex responses to such changing conditions as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions.

D)Scientist have become ever more accurate in their ability for providing models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing conditions,like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions

E)Scientists' ability to provide models of the atmosphere's complex response to such changing condition as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions have become evr more accurate
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by sl750 » Tue Oct 04, 2011 2:49 am
shrutee wrote:The ability of scientists to provide models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing condition,like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions,have become more accurate.

A)
B)The ability of scientist has become ever more accurate in provided models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing cond" such as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions.

c)Scientists have become able to provide more accurate models of the atmosphere's complex responses to such changing conditions as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions.

D)Scientist have become ever more accurate in their ability for providing models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing conditions,like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions

E)Scientists' ability to provide models of the atmosphere's complex response to such changing condition as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions have become evr more accurate
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by HSPA » Tue Oct 04, 2011 2:52 am
Hi Sl750,

Are you in total agreement with option C. Shouldnt it be

"Scientists are now able to provide better results than before"
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by sl750 » Tue Oct 04, 2011 3:01 am
@HSPA

Well, you can word this sentence in different ways, but among all the options, option C seems right
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by vidyame » Tue Oct 04, 2011 5:15 am
A) The ability of scientists to provide models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing condition,like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions,have become more accurate. - Sub verb disagreement

B)The ability of scientist has become ever more accurate in provided models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing cond" such as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions. - ability cannot be accurate
c)Scientists have become able to provide more accurate models of the atmosphere's complex responses to such changing conditions as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions. - best choice after eliminiating the rest and also accurate has to refer to "models" and not ability
D)Scientist have become ever more accurate in their ability for providing models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing conditions,like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions - Sub verb disagreement

E)Scientists' ability to provide models of the atmosphere's complex response to such changing condition as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary motions have become evr more accurate - Sub verb disagreement
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by shrutee » Tue Oct 04, 2011 9:04 pm
had "provided" been "providing" in option B,then what would have been the correct answer?
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by shrutee » Tue Oct 04, 2011 9:06 pm
"has become able"in option c sounds awkward
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by gunjan1208 » Tue Oct 04, 2011 11:44 pm
Hi Shrutee,

See what sl750 is saying in his explanation to HSPA. I agree with him. The right answer choice is C

Not only it deliveres better meaning of others but also uses such as instead of like.
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