manhatan sc 4

[resilient]

That every worker has a clean criminal record is of some importance to investment banks which is why a stringent background check is a necessary prerequisite for all of their job applicants.
a.That every worker has a clean criminal record is of some importance to investment banks which is why a stringent background check is a necessary prerequisite for all of their job applicants
b.Clean criminal records of their employees is important to investment banks; hence, a stringent background check are necessary prerequisites for employment
c.Because they consider it important that all of their employees have a clean criminal record, investment banks require each job applicant to undergo a stringent background check
d.It is of some importance that all investment banks’ workers have clean criminal records which is why many of them undergo stringent background checks
e.The reason that investment banks require background checks of their applicants is because they require clean criminal records of their employees



qa is c

[tacosychelas]

A) “which” wrongly refers to “banks” rather than to the situation.
B) “a stringent background check” is singular; however, it is wrongly followed by the plural form “are”
C) is allright
D) “which” wrongly refers to “records” rather than to the situation.
E) should say “The reason that…is that”, not “The reason that…is because”

Corrections or points of improvement are welcome

[betongmat]

I think there is "Pronoun reference" error in the sentence E because pronoun 'they' is not clearly pointing to the investment banks.

[GmatKiss]

IMO:C