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by GmatKiss » Wed Sep 21, 2011 3:32 am
Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore refused to carry even a pound of mail, despite being offered $1,000 to do so.

A. Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore
B. When Charles Lindbergh was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, being very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he
C. Since he was very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, so Charles Lindbergh
D. Being very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight was the reason that Charles Lindbergh
E. Very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight, Charles Lindbergh

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by gunjan1208 » Wed Sep 21, 2011 3:54 am
IMO E
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by saketk » Wed Sep 21, 2011 4:10 am
IMO E..
maintains the intended meaning and the problem of dangling modifiers is resolved in option E
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by GmatKiss » Wed Sep 21, 2011 4:14 am
Why not A ?
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by Deepthi Subbu » Wed Sep 21, 2011 4:54 am
IMO E
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by gunjan1208 » Wed Sep 21, 2011 4:58 am
A. Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore
B. When Charles Lindbergh was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, being very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he
C. Since he was very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, so Charles Lindbergh
D. Being very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight was the reason that Charles Lindbergh
E. Very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight, Charles Lindbergh: This make the first underlined portion as opening modifier (though it is long but it is the best choice) and the, Charles becomes the subject directly.....

In fact, Manhattan mentions this issue. What is OA?
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by GmatKiss » Wed Sep 21, 2011 5:02 am
gunjan1208 wrote:A. Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore
B. When Charles Lindbergh was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, being very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he
C. Since he was very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, so Charles Lindbergh
D. Being very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight was the reason that Charles Lindbergh
E. Very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight, Charles Lindbergh: This make the first underlined portion as opening modifier (though it is long but it is the best choice) and the, Charles becomes the subject directly.....

In fact, Manhattan mentions this issue. What is OA?
where is the first underlined portion? - Not getting it :(
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by gunjan1208 » Wed Sep 21, 2011 5:06 am
I am sorry. I meant,"Very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight,"
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