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by jjsd509 » Thu Mar 13, 2008 12:18 pm
Only thing I can see is the parallelism between "the removal of" and "the clearing of."

if it stated "as a result of removing... and clearing surrounding woodlands" it would be accurate.
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by rey.fernandez » Thu Mar 13, 2008 12:56 pm
I agree with the parallelism argument. Additionally, there's an issue with clarity of meaning: "...as a result of removing the native fox population..." suggests that the cottontail rabbit population is what removed the fox population.
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