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by atulmangal » Tue Apr 05, 2011 8:02 am
The redefined role of some Human Resources departments as powerful strategic consultants, rather than merely working as a division of a company, have allowed these departments to provide advising services that are more objective for a corp-oration, including recommendations to change management or blunt assessments of wasted costs.

(A)merely working as a division of a company, have allowed these departments to provide advising services that are more objective for a corporation, including

(B)as merely working as a division of a company, have allowed these departments to provide advising services that are more objective for a corporation, which include

(C)as mere company divisions, has allowed these departments to provide advising services that are more objective for a corporation that includes

(D)mere company divisions, has allowed these departments to provide advising services that are more objective for a corporation, which includes

(E)mere company divisions, has allowed these departments to provide advising services that are more objective for a corporation, including
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by HSPA » Tue Apr 05, 2011 8:15 am
X as Y rather than Z....powerful consultants rather than mere divisions. (D/E)

The redefined role as powerful X includes recommondations ... which includes recommondations does what?
....doubting D

POE : E
First take: 640 (50M, 27V) - RC needs 300% improvement
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by ram2 » Tue Apr 05, 2011 8:53 am
(A)merely working as a division of a company, have allowed these departments to provide advising services that are more objective for a corporation, including
merely working as a division of a company - not parallel with Human Resources departments as powerful strategic consultants


(B)as merely working as a division of a company, have allowed these departments to provide advising services that are more objective for a corporation, which include -- awkward construction

(C)as mere company divisions, has allowed these departments to provide advising services that are more objective for a corporation that includes

as is wrong here...that --> incorrectly refers to corporation
(D)mere company divisions, has allowed these departments to provide advising services that are more objective for a corporation, which includes

,which --> incorrectly refers to corporation

(E)mere company divisions, has allowed these departments to provide advising services that are more objective for a corporation, including[/quote]
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by aspirant2011 » Tue Apr 05, 2011 9:00 am
The redefined role of some Human Resources departments as powerful strategic consultants, rather than merely working as a division of a company, have allowed these departments to provide advising services that are more objective for a corp-oration, including recommendations to change management or blunt assessments of wasted costs.

(A)merely working as a division of a company, have allowed these departments to provide advising services that are more objective for a corporation, including

(B)as merely working as a division of a company, have allowed these departments to provide advising services that are more objective for a corporation, which include

(C)as mere company divisions, has allowed these departments to provide advising services that are more objective for a corporation that includes ---------> seems as if corporation includes recommendations to change

(D)mere company divisions, has allowed these departments to provide advising services that are more objective for a corporation, which includes ---------> seems as if corporation includes recommendations to change

(E)mere company divisions, has allowed these departments to provide advising services that are more objective for a corporation, including
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by finalshot123 » Tue Apr 05, 2011 9:09 am
subject verb..singular so has. left with C,D,E
,which - left with C/E
it should be including modifying entire clause...so E
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