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by salty » Mon Jan 03, 2011 6:04 am
Hi,
This is AWA argument essay. Please review and grade the essay. Please send your suggestions so that I can improve asap.
salty.
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by Whitney Garner » Mon Jan 03, 2011 9:37 am
Hi, thanks for posting your essays! Just an FYI that instructors don't grade or give feedback on essays (see the forum guidelines for details).

But I certainly hope other community members respond. Also, if you're in our class, you'll have an opportunity to get essays graded and get written feedback during the course (after class 6). Finally, you can get essays graded by GMAT Write (the official essay grading service from the makers of the exam) - they'll both grade the essays and provide feedback as to how to improve (for a fee). For details and pricing, go to www.mba.com and search for GMAT Write.

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by salty » Sat Jan 08, 2011 3:40 am
Hi all,
Can anyone point out errors? It will be great help to me to improve my essay.
Thanks in advance.
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