I can recommend a few good resources:
1. When I was applying, I used mbaMission's (free) personal statement guide to help me frame my letter of intent, or goals essay. You can get that here: https://www.mbamission.com/docs/mbamissi ... _guide.pdf
2. I also really like the book, Your MBA Game Plan, as a comprehensive guide to the process. They also have great advice for your personal statement.
Since applying, (and getting accepted to Wharton, Columbia, and Tuck), I've started my own admissions essay editing service, My MBA Story. If you'd like me to review your letter of intent, I'd be happy to. What schools are you applying to?
I also write a blog at https://mymbastory.tumblr.com/, which has some free advice.
Feel free to e-mail me if you have additional questions, and good luck!
Julie












