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by gmat009 » Sat Nov 22, 2008 9:54 pm
While some propose to combat widespread illegal copying of computer programs by attempting to change people's attitudes toward pirating, others by suggesting reducing software prices to decrease the incentive for pirating, and still others by calling for the prosecution of those who copy software illegally.
(A) by suggesting reducing software prices to decrease the incentive for pirating, and still others by calling
(B) by suggesting the reduction of software prices to decrease the incentive for pirating, and still others call
(C) suggest the reduction of software prices for decreasing the incentive for pirating, and still others call
(D) suggest the reduction of software prices to decrease the incentive for pirating, and still others by calling
(E) suggest reducing software prices to decrease the incentive for pirating, and still others are calling
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by vivek.kapoor83 » Sat Nov 22, 2008 10:38 pm
IMO it should be A coz
some propose by X ,others by Y and still others by Z
So, there are 3 wys to comabt piracing X,Y,Z should be parallel in strucutre. So A.

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by Jatinder » Sat Nov 22, 2008 10:43 pm
IMO C

some propose....others suggest, .......and still others call
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by gmat009 » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:17 pm
Ans is neither A nor C

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by logitech » Sun Nov 23, 2008 12:16 am
some propose , others suggest reducing software prices to decrease the incentive for pirating, and still others are calling

E

I did not pick D because by calling is not parallel to propose and suggest.
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by karmayogi » Sun Nov 23, 2008 2:33 am
IMO E.

My logic: some verb1 X, others verb2 Y, and rest verb3 Z.
Where,
verb1, verb2 and verb3 should be parallel
X, Y and Z should be parallel.

Though I am little skeptic about the last part (verb3 z), E is the best among the lot.

C: for decreasing awkward.
D: 'by calling' is not parallel with propose and suggest.

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by Jatinder » Sun Nov 23, 2008 4:32 am
i have not seen a single official problem in which parallelism has to be compromised in favour of awkwordness.
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by tanviet » Sun Nov 23, 2008 5:26 am
some propose, other suggest, and other call

E is wrong because "reduction ..." should parallel to " prosecution of..."

so C is best

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by mals24 » Sun Nov 23, 2008 6:25 am
I'm also in favor of option E.

Some propose, others suggest, others are calling

The bold words are all verbs. 'Are calling' is a verb. When you use helping words like is, are, have, has before the '-ing' and '-ed' words, only then they become verbs.

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by Tryingmybest » Sun Nov 23, 2008 8:14 am
OA PLZ?

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by gmat009 » Sun Nov 23, 2008 8:32 am
OA is E

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by karmayogi » Sun Nov 23, 2008 10:51 am
mals24 wrote:I'm also in favor of option E.

Some propose, others suggest, others are calling

The bold words are all verbs. 'Are calling' is a verb. When you use helping words like is, are, have, has before the '-ing' and '-ed' words, only then they become verbs.
Any referral on 'helping verb + verb+ing'?
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by mals24 » Sun Nov 23, 2008 11:27 am
https://gs.fanshawec.ca/astracuzzi/Gramm ... odule8.pdf

Pg 2, under the heading Gerund Phrases.

Also if you add an article (A, an, the) before the '-ing' form, it becomes a noun.

Source: Wren and Martin. In fact if you have Wren and Martin, they have a pretty good explanation of gerunds, participles and infinitives.

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by GMATMadeEasy » Wed Aug 18, 2010 7:34 am
Source : OG 10th Edition - SC - 160 ..

This question i sno more in later editions , so this could be the reason tt question is not good .

Option E will be better with verb CALL, not ARE CALLING ?

But C is certainly wrong , in my opinion, because of incorrecat usage of "the reduction of software prices for decreasing " .

"Suggest reducing software prices to decrease the incentive for pirating " is better because you are communicating intention here so infinitve is the best .