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Need help with the SC

by sochatte » Wed Nov 28, 2007 12:39 pm
Need help with the following SC

Q8:

The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is famous for its aggressive hunting pods.



A. include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is

B. include the animal known as the killer whale, growing as big as 30 feet long and

C. include the animal known as the killer whale, growing up to 30 feet long and being

D. include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow as big as 30 feet long and is
E. include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and it is
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by Danielle » Wed Nov 28, 2007 12:48 pm
The answer is A.

A -- nothing wrong grammatically
B -- growing is a gerund and it out of place, and 'as big as 30 feet long' is awkward since 'big' is not a good word to describe how long something can get. It should be 'as long as 30 feet'.
C -- growing and being are both gerunds and out of place
D -- same problem with 'as big as 30 ft long'
E -- 'it' is redundant
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