Heightened land erosion

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Heightened land erosion

by YellowSapphire » Sun Aug 01, 2010 9:17 pm
Heightened land erosion, caused by human activity, has many negative effects including the following: algae blooms, coral reef destruction, imbalance of the fish population, and the introduction of harmful chemicals to the ocean's environment.

A) including the following: algae blooms, coral reef destruction, imbalance of the fish population, and the introduction of harmful chemicals to the ocean's environment.
B) including: algae blooms, coral reef destruction, imbalance of the fish population, and harmful chemicals entering the ocean's environment.
C) including: algae blooms, coral reef destruction, imbalance of the fish population, and the introduction of harmful chemicals to the ocean's environment.
D) including the following: algae blooms, coral reef destruction, imbalance of the fish population, and harmful chemicals entering the ocean's environment.
E) including the following: algae blooms, coral reef destruction, certain fish populations rising, certain fish populations falling, and the introduction of harmful chemicals to the ocean's environment.

How to decide between A and D?
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by outreach » Sun Aug 01, 2010 9:32 pm
algae blooms, coral reef destruction, imbalance of the fish population, and the introduction of

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stuck between a and c
but i feel A shd be correct
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by neha.patni » Sun Aug 01, 2010 9:33 pm
YellowSapphire wrote:Heightened land erosion, caused by human activity, has many negative effects including the following: algae blooms, coral reef destruction, imbalance of the fish population, and the introduction of harmful chemicals to the ocean's environment.

A) including the following: algae blooms, coral reef destruction, imbalance of the fish population, and the introduction of harmful chemicals to the ocean's environment.
B) including: algae blooms, coral reef destruction, imbalance of the fish population, and harmful chemicals entering the ocean's environment.
C) including: algae blooms, coral reef destruction, imbalance of the fish population, and the introduction of harmful chemicals to the ocean's environment.
D) including the following: algae blooms, coral reef destruction, imbalance of the fish population, and harmful chemicals entering the ocean's environment.
E) including the following: algae blooms, coral reef destruction, certain fish populations rising, certain fish populations falling, and the introduction of harmful chemicals to the ocean's environment.

How to decide between A and D?
If you ask me to select between A & D - it would be A because we are discussing the harmful effects of land erosion and the effect is "the introduction of harmful chemicals" and not the harmful chemicals themselves.

But i have another confusion can't we select C. is " including the following" required?

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by YellowSapphire » Sun Aug 01, 2010 9:44 pm
neha.patni wrote:
If you ask me to select between A & D - it would be A because we are discussing the harmful effects of land erosion and the effect is "the introduction of harmful chemicals" and not the harmful chemicals themselves.

But i have another confusion can't we select C. is " including the following" required?
OA: A

"the introduction of harmful chemicals" is required as per the meaning of the sentence. This was confusion for me. Grammatically, "harmful chemicals entering the ocean's environment" is an absolute phrase. It is a noun expressionism. Why not parallel.

List after colon describes the word, which comes before colon.
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by adi_800 » Mon Aug 02, 2010 6:49 am
why do we require following?

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