BREAKING: Target Test Prep releases Brand New 2026 On Demand GMAT prep course

Redeem

Dr. Hegsted argues that just as polio vaccine

Expert replies
by netigen » Thu May 15, 2008 4:05 pm
Dr. Hegsted argues that just as polio vaccine is given to every person to protect the few who might actually contract polio, mass dietary change is needed to protect the significant number who are susceptible to the life-threatening effects of press eating habits.

(A) just as polio vaccine is given to every person to protect the few who might actually contract polio
(B) like polio vaccine, which is given to every person to protect the few who might contract polio
(C) similar to polio vaccine which is given to every person in order to protect the few who might actually contract polio
(D) while, to protect the few who might actually contract polio, polio vaccine is given to every person
(E) similar to the giving of polio vaccine to every person in order to protect the few who might contract polio actually
Join the discussion
Source: — Sentence Correction |

by arorag » Thu May 15, 2008 6:35 pm
IMO E. Here the correct comparision is between two actions (verb) giving of vaccine and chage....
Join the discussion

by s_raizada » Sat May 17, 2008 1:08 am
A - correct idiom is Jast as ....so
C - Which is non essential clause so need a comma before it
D - while is used to show contrast not similarities
E - sound awkward 'giving of polio vaccine'

Correct
B - comares similarties between two nouns Polio vaccine and mass dietary chang.

Btw - what is OA
Join the discussion

by chidcguy » Sat May 17, 2008 6:44 am
(B) is correct

like polio vaccine, which is given to every person to protect the few who might contract polio, mass dietary change is needed to protect the significant number who are susceptible to the life-threatening effects of press eating habits.

Which correctly refers to PV.

also if we remove the phrase in between, the sentence reads like PV, MDC

PV & MDC are nouns and like is needed.


Agree with s_raizada with explanations
Join the discussion

by netigen » Sat May 17, 2008 1:25 pm
OA is A
Join the discussion

like/as

by sogmat » Sun Jun 21, 2009 5:59 am
cant understand why A is the answer

why is B incorrect
Join the discussion

by nervesofsteel » Sun Apr 11, 2010 1:39 am
Can Just AS be used without so...

Please help...
Join the discussion

by subgeeth » Sun Apr 11, 2010 10:43 am
can any one explain what is wrong with other options
Still working on my dreams best part is I have not achieved one yet !!!!!
Join the discussion

by kevincanspain » Mon Apr 12, 2010 2:12 am
netigen wrote:Dr. Hegsted argues that just as polio vaccine is given to every person to protect the few who might actually contract polio, mass dietary change is needed to protect the significant number who are susceptible to the life-threatening effects of press eating habits.

(A) just as polio vaccine is given to every person to protect the few who might actually contract polio
(B) like polio vaccine, which is given to every person to protect the few who might contract polio
(C) similar to polio vaccine which is given to every person in order to protect the few who might actually contract polio
(D) while, to protect the few who might actually contract polio, polio vaccine is given to every person
(E) similar to the giving of polio vaccine to every person in order to protect the few who might contract polio actually

B mistakenly implies that polio vaccine is needed to protect...
C which should never be preceded by a noun without a preposition or comma
D is choppy and the use of while is confusing, as there is no contrast or simultaneity
E is awkward and verbose, actually is misplaced, lack of parallel structure

In the expression Just as..., so.... the word so is optional
Kevin Armstrong
GMAT Instructor
Gmatclasses
Madrid
Join the discussion

by subgeeth » Mon Apr 12, 2010 7:43 am
Hi kevin,

Didnt understand the reasoning why B is wrong A also implies the same as B can u explain my flaw, I think I am missing something.......
Still working on my dreams best part is I have not achieved one yet !!!!!
Join the discussion

by rockeyb » Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:30 am
subgeeth wrote:Hi kevin,

Didnt understand the reasoning why B is wrong A also implies the same as B can u explain my flaw, I think I am missing something.......
Lets look at option B :like polio vaccine, which is given to every person to protect the few who might contract polio


LIKE is used to compare noun or noun phrase .

Here we are comparing "polio vaccine" with "mass dietary change" Is that correct is "mass dietary change" a noun ?

I dont think so .

In fact if you look at B its comparing polio vaccine with the complete clause "mass dietary change is needed to protect the significant number who are susceptible to the life-threatening effects of press eating habits."

Also if you look at the sentence in orange above is marked off by comma making it non essential phrase which is in fact essential to make sense with sentence .

Please let me know if I am wrong.
"Know thyself" and "Nothing in excess"
Join the discussion

by arora007 » Thu Jul 29, 2010 6:30 am
kevincanspain wrote:
which should never be preceded by a noun without a preposition or comma

In the expression Just as..., so.... the word so is optional
Wow... did not know these 2 rules... a wonderful takeaway!!
https://www.skiponemeal.org/
https://twitter.com/skiponemeal
Few things are impossible to diligence & skill.Great works are performed not by strength,but by perseverance

pm me if you find junk/spam/abusive language, Lets keep our community clean!!
Join the discussion

• Page 1 of 1