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The electronics company has unveiled what it claims to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs less than 11 ounces.

A. to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs

B. to be the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, weighing

C. is the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, and it weighs

D. is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, which is as long as a handheld computer and weighs

E. is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, weighing
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by jube » Sat Jun 19, 2010 6:17 am
IMO D

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by kvcpk » Sat Jun 19, 2010 6:23 am
IMO D.

In Option A, "it" is ambiguous

In Option B, C "which is as long as a handheld computer" is modifying World instead of camcorder

In option E, "and" is missing before weighs. Also it is not parallel structured.

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by pnk » Sat Jun 19, 2010 6:53 am
nikhilkatira wrote:The electronics company has unveiled what it claims to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs less than 11 ounces.

A. to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs

B. to be the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, weighing

C. is the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, and it weighs

D. is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, which is as long as a handheld computer and weighs

E. is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, weighing
claims + that or infinitive is idiomatic => A vs B
A - llelism missing+ it ambiguous
B - IMO (which refers to camcorder not world; 'in the world' is missing critical phrase - so need to be closer to camorder)

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by hardik.jadeja » Sat Jun 19, 2010 6:57 am
IMO D

A) "the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs " - Not parallel.
B) Wrongly implies that it is the handheld computer that weighs less than 11 ounces.
C) Parallelism error similar to the one in A.
D) Correct
E) Same error as in option B.

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by nikhilkatira » Sat Jun 19, 2010 7:14 am
hardik.jadeja wrote:IMO D

A) "the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs " - Not parallel.
B) Wrongly implies that it is the handheld computer that weighs less than 11 ounces.
C) Parallelism error similar to the one in A.
D) Correct
E) Same error as in option B.

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IMO also D

but OA is B
This question is taken from gmat sets - set 21.

experts pls help.
Which is the right answer ?
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by real2008 » Sat Jun 19, 2010 7:21 am
IMO A should be answer.

'claim to be' is correct idiom.

In B 'weighing' wrongly refers to computer

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by pnk » Sat Jun 19, 2010 7:30 am
nikhilkatira wrote:
hardik.jadeja wrote:IMO D

A) "the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs " - Not parallel.
B) Wrongly implies that it is the handheld computer that weighs less than 11 ounces.
C) Parallelism error similar to the one in A.
D) Correct
E) Same error as in option B.

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IMO also D

but OA is B
This question is taken from gmat sets - set 21.

experts pls help.
Which is the right answer ?
To me it appears a subjunctive case - so eliminated C/D/E.
claims + that or infinitive is idiomatic => A vs B
A - llelism missing+ it ambiguous
B - IMO (which refers to camcorder not world; 'in the world' is missing critical phrase - so need to be closer to camorder)
hardik.jadeja wrote:
IMO D

A) "the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs " - Not parallel.
B) Wrongly implies that it is the handheld computer that weighs less than 11 ounces.
C) Parallelism error similar to the one in A.
D) Correct
E) Same error as in option B.

Hope that helps..
In B - weighing is an adverbial modifier...so modifies t previous clause not computer"digital camcorder in the world...is...as a handheld computer, weighing".

IMO - B

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by hardik.jadeja » Sat Jun 19, 2010 7:44 am
nikhilkatira wrote: IMO also D

but OA is B
This question is taken from gmat sets - set 21.

experts pls help.
Which is the right answer ?
I think you have the wrong OA. It is D.

Refer these threads:
https://www.beatthegmat.com/the-electron ... 41041.html

https://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/use ... t1766.html

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