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by frank1 » Sun Apr 25, 2010 8:24 pm
Long sentence seems always hard
D seems more right to me....
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by akhpad » Sun Apr 25, 2010 8:50 pm
"when" refers to time.

when ............, noun / pronoun ..................
Such construction is not there in A and C

D - "adopted by" passive and not even better
B - Modifier problem

E - Correct
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by frank1 » Sun Apr 25, 2010 11:41 pm
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When Eli Candy Staton drafted the declaration


Was it Eli candy (only) who drafted it,or is it the others who drafted it and her something (may be a principle or writing) was included in it

from E it sounds like it was (all) her,who drafted it....
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by akhpad » Sun Apr 25, 2010 11:44 pm
Here, Official answer is E.

We cannot question on official answer. we have to work with that.
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by kevincanspain » Mon Apr 26, 2010 1:57 am
frank1 wrote:About E
When Eli Candy Staton drafted the declaration


Was it Eli candy (only) who drafted it,or is it the others who drafted it and her something (may be a principle or writing) was included in it

from E it sounds like it was (all) her,who drafted it....
Try to rely on the orginal for meaning: Eli was the author.
Also note that the past perfect is incorrect here
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by frank1 » Mon Apr 26, 2010 5:53 am
kevincanspain wrote:
frank1 wrote:About E
When Eli Candy Staton drafted the declaration


Was it Eli candy (only) who drafted it,or is it the others who drafted it and her something (may be a principle or writing) was included in it

from E it sounds like it was (all) her,who drafted it....
Try to rely on the orginal for meaning: Eli was the author.
Also note that the past perfect is incorrect here
ok i got it sir.
Any way i think i used my common sense (which was not useful here...lol),means most of the declarations are drafted by convention not a single person.
So may be i used it when i tried to find meaning of sentence and i was trapped(as they say gmat trap)

any way i got it now

By the way,i have heard past perfect should be avoided as much as possible(as it adds redundancy),but does it mean that it should be eliminated in all cases
for eg, what is problem with past perfect tense of the answer choice of this question?
is it gramatically incorrect or it just adds redundancy?
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