MGMAT

[thephoenix]

When airline carriers are able to impose a significant fare increase without deterring many price-sensitive passengers, it is an encouraging sign for the health of the airline industry.

A - When airline carriers are able to impose a significant fare increase without deterring many price-sensitive passengers
B - When airline carriers are able to impose a significant fare increase without deterring many passengers who are price-sensitive
C - When airline carriers may raise fares significantly without it acting as a deterrent to many price-sensitive passengers
D - When airline carriers may raise fares significantly without it deterring many price-sensitive passengers
E - When airline carriers are able to impose a significant fare increase without it deterring many price-sensitive passengers

whats wrong in B

[Shawshank]

When airline carriers are able to impose a significant fare increase without deterring many price-sensitive passengers, it is an encouraging sign for the health of the airline industry.

A - When airline carriers are able to impose a significant fare increase without deterring many price-sensitive passengers
B - When airline carriers are able to impose a significant fare increase without deterring many passengers who are price-sensitive
C - When airline carriers may raise fares significantly without it acting as a deterrent to many price-sensitive passengers
D - When airline carriers may raise fares significantly without it deterring many price-sensitive passengers
E - When airline carriers are able to impose a significant fare increase without it deterring many price-sensitive passengers

whats wrong in B

IMO -- A..

I think B is wordy..

[subgeeth]

A is more concise then B

[pradeepkaushal9518]

i also choose A B is wordy what is OA

[aspirant2010]

B is wordy because it uses "passengers who are price-sensitive "..........A is more concise

[grockit_andrea]

"Price-sensitive passengers" is a less-wordy way of saying "passengers who are price-sensitive." Remember that when you've narrowed your choices down and all the remaining answers are free of discernible grammatical flaws, turn to style issues, including conciseness.