pl. explain the sentence correction.......

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pl. explain the sentence correction.......

by ansumania » Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:49 pm
please explain which one should be correct and why---

Q- In recent years cattle breeders have increasingly used crossbreeding , in part that their steers should acquire certain characteristics and partly because crossbreeding is said to produce hybrid vigor.

a-in part that their steers should acquire certain characteristics

b- in part for the acquisition of certain characteristics in their steers

c- partly because of their steers acquiring certain characteristics

d- partly because certain characteristics should be acquired by the steers

e-partly to acquire certain charactersitics in their steers

regards,

Ansuman
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by Phirozz » Mon Apr 12, 2010 6:11 pm
IMO E.

C changes the meaning
D is uses passive and wordy
E conveys the intended meaning in a concise manner.
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by kstv » Mon Apr 12, 2010 6:12 pm
Lot has been discussed in this thread,

https://www.beatthegmat.com/og-sc-22-confused-t5701.html

though, not sure whether all issues have been addressed.

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