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by crackgmat007 » Fri Aug 07, 2009 8:54 am
Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate
finds of ancient art, the
nautical archaeologist needs specialized knowledge of the history
and theory of ship design in order to understand shipwrecks.
A. Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to
evaluate finds of ancient art, the
B. Just as an archaeologist who needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of
ancient art, a
C. Just as an archaeologist needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of
ancient art, so a
D. Like the archaeologist who evaluates finds of ancient art and requires a
background in art history, so the
E. As evaluating finds of ancient art requires an archaeologist who has a background
in art history, so the

Can someone explain why reasoning for ruling out B. OA is C

I read that Just as....., SO constructions, SO need not be there all the times. Pls explain.
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Re: Aarchaeologist

by shahdevine » Fri Aug 07, 2009 9:26 am
crackgmat007 wrote:Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate
finds of ancient art, the
nautical archaeologist needs specialized knowledge of the history
and theory of ship design in order to understand shipwrecks.
A. Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to
evaluate finds of ancient art, the
B. Just as an archaeologist who needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of
ancient art, a
C. Just as an archaeologist needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of
ancient art, so a
D. Like the archaeologist who evaluates finds of ancient art and requires a
background in art history, so the
E. As evaluating finds of ancient art requires an archaeologist who has a background
in art history, so the

Can someone explain why reasoning for ruling out B. OA is C

I read that Just as....., SO constructions, SO need not be there all the times. Pls explain.
this is idiom. just as x...so y...you have to memorize idioms. nothing more to it.

you got this man!
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by crackgmat007 » Fri Aug 07, 2009 9:50 am
MGMAT SC Guide states that sometimes JUST AS appears without SO. So confused a bit when I saw B & C.

Also, is usage of WHO in B correct?
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by Kebab » Fri Aug 07, 2009 9:59 am
there is no parallelism in B. (btw, because of WHY)

hence, the only way out is through C
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by georgeung » Fri Aug 07, 2009 11:00 am
Kebab wrote:there is no parallelism in B. (btw, because of WHY)

hence, the only way out is through C
Kebab is right, there is no parallelism in B. B add's "who" and who is not found anywhere in the main clause.

Who looks like a modifier, but actually throws the answer choice off.
Just as an archaeologist who needs a background in art history...
a nautical archaeologist ____ needs specialized knowledge...

Then I would say the Idiom. It's not needed in all cases, but it just makes C the better choice.
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by crackgmat007 » Fri Aug 07, 2009 5:31 pm
georgeung wrote:
Kebab wrote:there is no parallelism in B. (btw, because of WHY)

hence, the only way out is through C
Kebab is right, there is no parallelism in B. B add's "who" and who is not found anywhere in the main clause.

Who looks like a modifier, but actually throws the answer choice off.
Just as an archaeologist who needs a background in art history...
a nautical archaeologist ____ needs specialized knowledge...

Then I would say the Idiom. It's not needed in all cases, but it just makes C the better choice.
I dont see parallelism error. Here two nouns are compared. One is 'archaeologist' & other is 'nautical archaeologist'. The first noun can have a modifer by itself and such modifier need not be there after second noun.

Experts pls clarify if there is any grammatical error in B or if I am missing something. Tx much.
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Re: Aarchaeologist

by riteshbindal » Fri Aug 07, 2009 6:44 pm
crackgmat007 wrote:Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate
finds of ancient art, the
nautical archaeologist needs specialized knowledge of the history
and theory of ship design in order to understand shipwrecks.
A. Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to
evaluate finds of ancient art, the
B. Just as an archaeologist who needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of
ancient art, a
C. Just as an archaeologist needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of
ancient art, so a
D. Like the archaeologist who evaluates finds of ancient art and requires a
background in art history, so the
E. As evaluating finds of ancient art requires an archaeologist who has a background
in art history, so the

Can someone explain why reasoning for ruling out B. OA is C

I read that Just as....., SO constructions, SO need not be there all the times. Pls explain.
I am not so good at explanation, but I can explain the way through which I got the right answer.
A is of course wrong as it has an issue of parallelism.
B --> I thought this seems wrong because in first half, it says that Just as an archaeologist who needs. This "who" word bothered me a bit because it doesnt clarify that all the archaeologists need background etc or some of them need. However second half shows that all the natural archaeologists need blah blah blah. So it was kind of vauge for me.
C--> This resolved the confusion which B had. It kinda shows that any archaelogist needs x and just like that any natural architect needs y.
D --> Like is not preferred by GMAT.
E --> Parallelism issue.

Let me know if I was not clear in explaining any point.
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by crackgmat007 » Fri Aug 07, 2009 7:48 pm
If who is the only issue, ignoring who, is Just as.....without SO correct in choice B?
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by singh181 » Fri Aug 07, 2009 9:04 pm
"who" in B is redundant.
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