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imp. modifier problem

by vineet0120 » Sat Jul 11, 2009 12:08 am
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I have a problem related to modiers.

* To determine whether there are deposits of frozen water on the moon, research scientists at NASA launched two unmanned satellites that orbited the moon's atmosphere, analyzing radar echos from the lunar surface.


A) analyzing
B) as the analysis technique of
C) to the analysis of
D) to analyze
E) a tecnique for analyzing



OA A

Could you explain me the role of modifier “analyzing” --- to what it is modifying and how ??

What are the rules ??

Are present and past participle modify the subject of the verb ??

As in these 2 examples

1. Socrates questioned the foundations of political behavior, forcing Athenians to examine duty they owed the state, encouraging youth to question the authority of their elders, claiming all the while that he wanted only to puzzle out the truth.

2. Leonardo da Vinci was a man of powerful intellect, driven by an insatiable curiosity and haunted by a vision of artistic perfection



Or modify the nearest noun as in the OG,if not then why modifier is not modifying , animal-hide shields with wooden frames

1. For members of the seventeenth century Ashanti nation in Africa, animal-hide shields with wooden frames were essential items of military equipment, a method to protect warriors against enemy arrows and spears.

A) a method to protect
B) as a method protecting
C) protecting
D) as a protection of
E) to protect

OA C



This is also the eg. Of OG

Og11 Sc127

127. Found throughout Central and South America, sloths hang from trees by long
rubbery limbs and sleep 15 hours a day, moving infrequently enough that two
species of algae grow on its coat and between its toes.
(A) sloths hang from trees by long rubbery limbs and sleep 15 hours a day,
moving infrequently enough
(B) sloths hang from trees by long rubbery limbs, they sleep 15 hours a day, and
with such infrequent movements
(C) sloths use their long rubbery limbs to hang from trees, sleep 15 hours a day,
and move so infrequently
(D) the sloth hangs from trees by its long rubbery limbs, sleeping 15 hours a day
and moving so infrequently
(E) the sloth hangs from trees by its long rubbery limbs, sleeps 15 hours a day,
and it moves infrequently enough

OA A
Source: — Sentence Correction |

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by brick2009 » Sat Jul 11, 2009 7:58 am
I can try explaining the tribe question:

The question to be asked: What is the method? The sentence dosent talk of any method par se.. it identifies animal hides as "items"...

also animal hide shield with wooden shields .....IS that a METHOD?

Eliminate A/B

Another approach.... REMOVE irrelevant part in the sentence...to

For members of xxxxxx( X tribe) , animal-hide shields ...........were essential items of military equipment, [protecting]

with the remaining three choices...C is the only one that makes sense..

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by goelmohit2002 » Sat Jul 11, 2009 9:29 am
Probably the following link will help you clear all the doubts related to comma "ing" modifier.

https://www.beatthegmat.com/ing-modifier ... tml#162443

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by turbo jet » Sat Jul 11, 2009 1:53 pm
goelmohit2002 wrote:Probably the following link will help you clear all the doubts related to comma "ing" modifier.

https://www.beatthegmat.com/ing-modifier ... tml#162443

Thanks a ton Mohit!!! Great qs and answer thread.
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by vineet0120 » Sat Jul 11, 2009 9:03 pm
goelmohit2002 see this problem-----
Question 56 from og 12
1 Many of the earliest known images of the Hindu deities
in India date from the time of Kushan empire, fashioned either from the spotted sandstone of Mathura or Gandharan grey schist
explanation given in OG 12
• empire, fashioned either from the spotted sandstone of Mathura or
wrong according to the OG: placement of the modifier fashioned ---- suggests that the Empire (the closeset noun ), not the images of the deities , was fashioned out of these materials.
i know the answer is wrong because of parallelism.
But,the question remains -- how modifier "fashioned" is modifying empire,not images as you have explained.

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by vineet0120 » Sun Jul 12, 2009 3:43 am
q 56 from og
Many of the earliest known images of the Hindu deities
in India date from the time of Kushan empire, fashioned either from the spotted sandstone of Mathura or Gandharan grey schist
1. empire, fashioned either from the spotted sandstone of Mathura or
2. empire, fashioned from either the spotted sandstone of Mathura or from
3. empire, either fashioned from the spotted sandstone of Mathura or
4. empire and either fashioned from the spotted sandstone of Mathura or from
5. empire and were fashioned either from the spotted sandstone of Mathura or from

1. wrong according to the OG: placement of the modifier fashioned ---- suggests that the Empire (the closeset noun ), not the images of the deities , was fashioned out of these materials.;to parallel either from , the preposition from should also follow or .
2. parallelism requires that either precede the first appearance of from or that the second appearance of from be eliminated .
3. as in A and B , placement of the modifier after Empire is misleading ; parallelism requires that the phrase fashioned from , or another comparable verb and preposition, follow or.
4. Parallelism requires that a verb follow or, since a verb follows either.
5. Correct. Two verbs , date and were fashioned, introduce parallel predicates
For the subject , earliest known images ; the choices of media are correctly presented with the structure either from ---- or from

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