BREAKING: Target Test Prep releases Brand New 2026 On Demand GMAT prep course

Redeem

Target Test Prep · GMAT

Choose how you want to prepare

Learn live with an expert or move at your own pace. Every option includes the complete TTP study system.

★★★★★5.0559 reviews
GMATBootcamp Starts Sep 21
Chris Peckover, Target Test Prep GMAT expert
LIVE ONLINE BOOTCAMP

Live Online Bootcamp Class with Top GMAT Expert Chris Peckover

Sep 21 to Oct 9, 2026

Schedule
Mon to Fri · 7:00 to 10:00 PM ET
Included
Live classes + 6 months of TTP OnDemand
  • Boost your GMAT score in less than one month in a live online class
  • 6 months access to TTP OnDemand video courses included
View bootcamp & enroll
Limited cohort · enrollment openTarget Test Prep
EALiveTeach 5 seats left
Logan Thompson
EXECUTIVE ASSESSMENT

Sep 6 to Dec 6, 2026

with Logan Thompson

Schedule
Sun · 9:30 AM to 12:30 PM ET
Included
40 hours of live online classes plus six months of access to the complete TTP EA OnDemand course.
  • 165+ EA Score Guarantee
  • 4,100+ Quant, Verbal, and Integrated Reasoning practice questions
  • 400+ hours of in-depth video lessons
  • 3,000+ step-by-step video solutions
View EA class & enroll
Limited cohort · enrollment openTarget Test Prep
GMATOnDemand Start anytime
SELF-PACED MASTERCLASS

Target Test Prep GMAT OnDemand

Complete access from day one. Study on your schedule.

715+ score guarantee
$0to start then $127/mo
  • Personalized study plan and analytics
  • Thousands of lessons and practice questions

Compare the format, schedule, and included access before enrolling. Prices and seat counts shown reflect the supplied offer details.

Anyone plz rate this essay - Argument?

Expert replies
by piyush_nitt » Sat May 02, 2009 2:19 pm
The following appeared as part of an article in a weekly newsmagazine.
“The country of Sacchar can best solve its current trade deficit problem by lowering the price of sugar, its primary export. Such an action
would make Sacchar better able to compete for markets with other sugar-exporting countries. The sale of Sacchar’s sugar abroad would
increase, and this increase would substantially reduce Sacchar’s trade deficit.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.


The author of an article recommended that sacchar can reduce its trade deficit by lowering the price of sugar. The line of reasoning based on the fact that lower price of sugar ,sacchar's primary export, would make a Sacchar a better competitor and increase in the sale of sugar at abroad would reduce its trade deficits. The author has missed out lot of relevant facts that are required in order to evaluate the argument. Stated in this way , argument has several flaws.

Firstly, The author main assumption is that lower price of sugar will definately increase revenues. It is possible that even if the price of the sugar is lowered there is not much demand of sugar in the market. There are not enough buyers for the sugar produced by the sacchar. The author has not provided any evidence that links the lowering price will definately improve sales of sugar, Therefore , The assumption is unwarranted and unsupported.

Secondly , author has not able to provide any evidence that how the country going to bear the reduction of price. for Instance , it is possible that reduction in price of sugar cause unrest among farmers or demoralize them . Farmers may stop proudcing sugar anymore due to low return on investment.

Thirdly, The author falsely assumed that reason for less selling of sugar is the higher price. It is possible that price of sugar is lower than what other countries are offering but sugar quality is really poor or may be taxes are too high. Again , the author has not provided any evidences.

Finally , The reducuton in the price of sugar considered to be the best way to reduce trade deficit's of sacchar. There could be other ways to reduce the trade deficit's. The country can set up new sugar based industries and sell the finished processed products instead of selling raw sugar. This way not only country's can increase the revenue but also create new job opportunities.

In sum , The argument is weak. The argument would have been strengthened if the author provides evidence that shows that reduction of price will definately increase the revenues and higher price is the only cause of less demand of sugar. Also, The author has to provide an evidence that there is not other way to reduce the trade deficits. In the absence of these evidences, argument is unconvincing
Join the discussion
Source: — GMAT Essays (AWA) |

• Page 1 of 1