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Parallel forms

by callmemo » Sun Jan 04, 2009 9:28 pm
Astronomers have theorized that the Big Bang governs the behavior of interstellar dust, particles that comprise the atoms and molecules created in the progenitive explosion and persisting in even the emptiest regions of space.

A. persisting
B. persists
C. persisted
D. they persist
E. are persisting

OA: A
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by ronniecoleman » Sun Jan 04, 2009 10:23 pm
IMO B



Astronomers have theorized that the Big Bang governs the behavior of interstellar dust, particles that comprise the atoms and molecules created in the progenitive explosion and persisting in even the emptiest regions of space.

A. persisting
B. persists
C. persisted
D. they persist
E. are persisting

IMO B

created in the progenitive explosion : past particple modifier ...
persisting in even the emptiest regions of space.... present participle modifier
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by goelmohit2002 » Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:11 am
IMO persists is modifying particles....so how can it be "b"....isn't here subject verb agreement issue coming?

Partciles....persists.....(if we need to keep b..then shouldn't it be "persist")

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by tanviet » Mon Jan 05, 2009 1:41 am
"persists", "persisted", "are persisting" are not // with "comprise"

"they persist" can not has "they"

A is correct

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by goelmohit2002 » Mon Jan 05, 2009 1:46 am
But "and persisting" is parallel to what ? to be parallel with particles...it need to have "that persist" or simply "persist"

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by logitech » Mon Jan 05, 2009 3:08 am
I put this as the last tip of the day:

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Karen wrote:It's A.

This problem is clearly based on the "giant fungus in the forest of Michigan" problem in OG-11 (sorry I forget which number that item is; I can look it up later if necessary), and the same solution applies.

The key here is that "persisting" is parallel to "created". In other words, this part of the sentence means the same as "the atoms and molecules that were created in the progenitive explosion and that persist in even the emptiest regions of space."

You may be wondering how an -ed form (a past participle) can be parallel to an -ing (a gerund). Well, even though they don't *look* very similar to each other, they're considered parallel in terms of their grammatical function. They're both adjectives formed from verbs. The -ing form is sometimes even called the "present participle," so you can see the similarity to the "past participle." So in other words, combinations like "recently lost and still missing," "shot and bleeding," or "diversified and growing" are all parallel.

B is wrong because it would have incorrect verb agreement.

C is wrong because it wouldn't be parallel -- C is a past tense form, which superficially *looks* like the past participle "created" but isn't the same kind of grammatical thing. "created" in this sentence is a participle, like "broken" or "thrown," not a past tense verb.

D is wrong because the subject 'they' makes this clause not parallel to anything else in the sentence. It can't be parallel to "that comprise the atoms and molecules... etc." (think of it this way -- could you say 'particles tha comprise the atoms and molecules created in the progenitive explosion and _that_ they persist..."??) And "they persist" is clearly not parallel to "created" either.

E "are persisting" is awkward and a strange choice of verb tense -- "are persisting" uses present progressive tense, which is used for temporary situations, things that are going on right around now but not for too much longer. It makes it sound like these particles are just hanging around for a little while -- the opposite of what the sentence is saying.
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by maihuna » Mon Jan 05, 2009 3:48 am
particles that X and Y

Particles here is the subject of the and conjunction:
X : that comprise the atoms and molecules created in the progenitive explosion

Y: persisting in even the emptiest regions of space

We know both parts joined with AND must be parallel, X is a subordinate clause introduced with that

In Y too, we need some suitable uses that makes this part another subordinate clause, and the gerund persisting is doing exactly the same.

Out of the given options:
A. persisting : correct as discussed
B. persists : it cannt refer to particles, it should have been persist
C. persisted : This past formation is at least necessary, the another clause is in present, this formation not used to introduce clauses
D. they persist : they refers ambiguously to more than one antecedents: particles, astronomers, even in gmat terminologu atoms and particles are likely antecedents
E. are persisting : Note the uses of and, another verb is incorrect.

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by goelmohit2002 » Mon Jan 05, 2009 3:50 am
Thanks Logitech. Is there any other easier way to reach to answer "a" ??????

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by logitech » Mon Jan 05, 2009 3:51 am
goelmohit2002 wrote:Thanks Logitech. Is there any other easier way to reach to answer "a" ??????
I think we should all be more familiar with the form Karen explained:
The -ing form is sometimes even called the "present participle," so you can see the similarity to the "past participle." So in other words, combinations like "recently lost and still missing," "shot and bleeding," or "diversified and growing" are all parallel.
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by goelmohit2002 » Mon Jan 05, 2009 3:57 am
IMO this is a pretty difficult GMAT Question. What you guys say ?

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